Update soon :)

This is great! Please update! :D

OMG! I love this! Plz plz PLZ update soon!

I like how you linked the begining of dreamfall (zoe in a coma) to being like her younger sister and reaching out to someone...anyone, and appeared to Kitty.

Thats a great way to begin the sequel.

Some grammar mistakes though.

I think the story's great- No, better than great, perfect! I hope you get a chance to update, since the story obviously meant a lot to you! I love it!

Really good, I love it. Just a note though; Stark is our Earth, the one Zoe and April are both originally from. You keep saying Stark but your talking about Arcadia.

Promising story. Hope to read more soon. Keep on writing it.

Nice chapter,I like how you've linked Kitty to Liv :) Update it as soon as you can ;)

This is excellant...but you really need to run a spell check. I found a lot of homonyms and typos when reading it. Also, when someone talks, use quotes, ", not -. Unless they changed that in the rules here, I haven't been here in a while.

Yay! An update! *rushes to read the chapter*

Oh wow! Background info on the main character, a hint about a journey, and a look to see how our Arcadian friends are doing! What more could a reader want?

It's a good chapter. I like how Zoe faintly hints about a journey and Kitty is really straight forward about it. I also like the scene in Arcadia, especially Kian's thoughts. They were very well done. I also like the ending.

Oh, and thanks for mentioning me. :)

Well, please update soon!

Another chapter! And a good one too.

So we are introduced to the main character, at least, I think she's the main character. Personally, I'd like to know more about her. For instance, how does she know Olivia? And why doesn't she like WATI? Other than that, everything's good.

Can't wait till the next chatper!

Yay! Another Longest Journey fic! Finally!

This story sounds great! Everything in this chapter is entierly plausible (if not exactly how it's going to be). The writing style is good too.

Please update soon. I can't wait to see the development of the story.