Hey, loved your story. Excellent job. I love how much you convey without there being a ton of dialog. I am usually the opposite. Enjoyed this a lot.

Oh man... what a beautiful story! There is SO much pain in this, SO much anguish, SO many feelings and they all came and fell and shattered upon me. I would give you a standing ovation If I could.

Oh wow, that hurt. I really liked this. Especially the dialogue, it's somehow truly realistic, I could feel what they were saying but still wasn't that sure about it which I loved cause it implies there's much more underneath those words. And Curt's POV it's really hard to write and I think you managed it very well.

Also, I'm writing an story myself and after reading this I'd really like your opinion. That's all, wonderful job!

oh! it is so good! you really did capture them! please continue and please give us a happy ending! the end of the movie makes me so sad. they needed to get back together. keep writing! (please)

I love this. It's the story I wanted to write but couldn't, and it's refreshing to see a fic where it wasn't all Brian's fault for once, because Curt was the one to leave, and both of them have their reasons why it all fell apart.

Very lovely imagery with the nail polish, and the language is masterful. Thank you for sharing.

Marvellous story! A tad depressing, but oh well, it's not s'posed to be too chipper, eh?v

Anyways, infinite stars.

Good job.I liked it really writing

Ooh. I read this with wide eyes from the very beginning. Definately gripping, it flows, and each words fairly burns with significance. A!

Aw. That 'break up' scene is one of my favorites. *sigh* It made me want to go paint my nails black.

That was /amazing/. I love VG... and I think you are incredibly talented and I loved the way you captured the emotion of the moment. Wonderful work.

that was lovely, *sniff* I adore your writing style, your language the way you twist the words, it's something I aspire to. marvelous job

that was beautiful, once again. i seem to review everything of yours using that one word. partly because i'm too lazy to think of another one, and partly because it's the word the springs to mind. it's sad, but it's ... beautiful [bet you didn't see that one coming...]

How can you not like the beginning to this story? I was hooked from the first sentence. This was a really good story. Explained very well. I loved it!

O.O That was *awesome*. Never would have thought that so much was said in such a short period of time. :) Great imagery; very well written.

Devastatingly sad. It left me feeling raw. ~norty