| Reviews for Concubines |
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  Belle chapter 1 . 4/3/2013 Hello :) I really did love the story up till this point, but it was a little confusing to be honest. For example, when the settings changed, I didn't know what was going on. It changed from one person's perspective so fast. One moment, Teanna was thinking/talking and the other, the Pharoh is talking/thinking. I'm just being honest. It would be a lot better if it clearly states the setting before the scene happened. May be a sentence that states who is speaking perhaps would be very helpful. |
| Yami chapter 1 . 10/5/2011 Wow! This is one of the best stories I have ever seen! Please...PLEASE go on! |
 browneyes730 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010 please come back to continue this. please? |
| princess blossom chapter 1 . 10/6/2009 Wow. This...this is the best story I read so far. Could u continue? Because I want to know wat will happen |
| ichika7walkure chapter 1 . 8/27/2009 I find this story really interesting. Please do continue with this. The suspense is killing me. I wanna know how Atem and Teanna are doing and how far their relationship will go... Please do continue this story... |
| blue wolf miko chapter 1 . 2/28/2009 Why did you stop. I wanna know what happens next. |
| fantasia-49 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 i love it i found it great really! |
| inu 4ever chapter 1 . 5/18/2008 PLZ UPDATE! I REALLY LOVE UR STORY SO HURRY UP. plz update. YOU ROCK! |
| missjewels chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 this is really good. Please update even though you havent done so in a really long time. |
| Elli Mac08 chapter 1 . 2/26/2008 This story is so good I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon! and ihope you make this into a Tea/Harem fic. Since she is a concubine and all but if you choice differently thats fine too. |
| MewmewInuSailorHeart chapter 1 . 9/5/2007 Get your butt down here and right person It's been a year for Heavens Sakes:( PLease write more soon |
| lovette ngbeken chapter 1 . 3/19/2007 please continue the story |
| VampiressBeauty20 chapter 1 . 3/15/2007 This sounds really good, I hope you update soon! Selene |
| IvoryCoral chapter 1 . 2/24/2007 Well, if nothing else, it's a freaking awesome first chapter. I like your writing style and not just the way you display character thoughts either. It's hard writing from several different perspectives at different points, but you've managed to make it work quite well. Can't wait to see how this pans out in the next chapter. Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses IvoryCoral |
| ANZUATEM FAN chapter 1 . 1/13/2007 hiya! This is a really sweet story! Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon! Can't wait to see what happens! x |
