| Reviews for Every Breath |
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   wovenbywords6213 chapter 1 . 11/30/2018 Ohmygosh! That was so, so good! I really liked it! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/7/2018 This was absolutely perfect! |
| toshiroxmomo122 chapter 2 . 7/13/2015 Your Rangiku was spot on! Great job. This was really cute. |
| Canadawear chapter 1 . 4/24/2014 im crying. I love seeing Momo on the path to recovery and Toshiro handling it amazingly. |
| Aronim chapter 2 . 7/24/2013 Haha, this was fun, even if Hinamori seems very bold to me. Good work. |
| MeBellis chapter 2 . 4/10/2011 This... is a very old story. I... don't particularly care. Because it was amazing. Very, very amazing. And the most strangest thing of all? I don't even like Hitsuhina. In fact, it's one of my least favourite pairings. But this, this brilliance, is AWESOME. They're so in character and the dialogue was so good and it's so weird that I'm fawning over something I normally wouldn't even look at but jhflgnahirvnkghileksnr. Matsumoto was my favourite. |
| SpaceNugget11 chapter 2 . 3/16/2011 LOVE IT |
| SpaceNugget11 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011 LOVED IT |
| hitsuhinarenrukiichihime4ever chapter 2 . 1/13/2011 Great hitsuhina work! Please update- Sort of a cliff hanger. Love it! |
| Megilien chapter 2 . 12/21/2010 Aww,man, what I wouldn't give for a new HitsuHina fic written by you...you're seriously one of the Top 3 HitsuHina fanfic writers I've come across, and it's such a darn shame there are only 2 of them so far:-s... Anyway, my point was that -in case you couldn't already tell- I simply adored this fanfic. You've kept everyone in character (and I should know, since I'm terribly, terribly critical and picky when it comes to IC portrayals, ESPECIALLY when they're about my favourite characters -which Toushirou is- /pairings -yup, that would be HitsuHina:)) -etc. - So glad you incorporated Hyourinmaru into this- you've given him another layer of awesome with that sarcastic, teasing humour, and his delightful banter with Toushirou XD . Plus, yay for sweet, mischievous Hinamori and teasing, big-sister-esque Matsumoto!:D In conclusion- thank you for this wonderful fanfic. I bow to your powers of awesome in all HitsuHina-things related! :D |
| Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 2 . 1/7/2010 The story was sweet and thought-provoking; I am still amazed that this author manages to so perfectly depict someone (Hitsugaya) we don't actually see much of in the manga. And in the omake Matsumoto, clearly standing in as the author's impish side, is perfectly ... impish, even as she drives Hitsugaya to be ever more perfectly Hitsugaya. Bonus line of dialogue: "Boobs off the desk"! |
| Angelwings228 chapter 2 . 12/22/2009 really funny. This is exactly what Rangiku would do to Toshiro. :D |
| persephonesfolly chapter 2 . 7/30/2009 Lovely story! You really nailed Hitsugaya's character and I enjoyed the unexpectedness of the kiss. Matsumoto was just like an evil older sister intent on provoking a love-struck younger brother. Nicely done. |
| adsjkfhk chapter 2 . 6/12/2009 omagod! i love this story! matsumoto was funny. "boobs off the desk" LOL |
| unformidable trust chapter 2 . 1/9/2009 lol, matsumoto is hilarious great story |
