i hate amelia potter x-(

Update please

It's been years please update I love your story it's very well written

I like this story. Please write more soon.

Please update!

I loved it please update more

I love it. I wish there was more...

Stick Milly in the House of the Ravens?

review!

MOREEEEEEEE! gqhhh don't stop _ i love this story
spent a day just ti finish this XD

I have read this fic of your and its amazing. I hope you update soon and not abandon it.

If HP/DM are brought up as brothers then any relationship between them other than brotherly is incest, Harry has even changed his name to Malfoy so they can't hide behind that. You'lll need to state an incestuous relationship in the Summary.

Also kindly don't reply to reviews in a chapter its annoying and a third of this chapters words of 1500 is authors notes/review replies which means this chapter is very short being 1000 words in length . If all of the chapters do this then approximately 9000 words of this chapter is AN, tell me do you like reading Authors notes if they're 9000 words long?

Reply to reviews in a PM or I'll delete the story, This is stated in the rules.

this is really interesting

Oh my goodness! This story is fantastic! I literally could not stop reading once I started! Draco and Harry are so adorable together! I love all of the non-con pairing. Oh and even your original characters are fantastic! Often original characters come off as boring and have way too many similar qualities to even differentiate between them except for by name. AND the amount of protectiveness Draco has over Harry *fan girl squeal*! Pretty please with Harry's sweet elf figure all for Draco write more when you get the chance!

You need to put a space between the dialog. Right now it is confusing to read, because it is all squished together. Also, straight is spelt incorrectly.

I think it would make it better if you gave more description. Like, the interaction between Chris and Harry, you should describe in more detail how Chris looked, or what Harry was feeling at the moment. Did his heart beat race? Was he nervous? Did he feel hate? Right now we can only guess what he was feeling.

Hello! Thought I might help a little with editing. First chapter was good, except for the wrong use of "there" it should be "their." In this chapter you had a run on sentence, first sentence. Last thing, when you are done the chapter put a breaker line or something so that the reader knows the chapter is done, and that you are now talking to reviews.

Story seems interesting so far, I shall continue reading!

Hope it helps, don't mean to be rude or anything. :)