Very interesting. I would really like to read more!

You should seriously update this story. It's got so much potential and only you can finish this. Please please please!

Oh please continue this story... I really hope you havent abandoned it. It isnt on the abandoned list, however it isnt on the works in progress list either. Its different from the rest of the stories out there and I'd love to know where you're going with this one...

Man. I hope that when you say, "LOOK GUYS! WHILE I WAS GONE, I FINISHED EVERY STORY I'VE EVER WRITTEN JUST FOR YOU GUYS! SORRY I TOOK SUCH A LONG TIME! I WANTED TO GET IT ALL DONE AT ONCE!"

Ha. Here's hoping.

I love your stories. Lovelovelove.

Come back.

It's everyone's biggest dream!

We love you!

I've always been an hardcore fan of your stories. Recently I re-read all of your rurouni kenshin stories again especially broken piece a real icon and masterpiece.

I just wanted to say that in all of your unfinished rurouni kenshin stories, this one has the best potential. In this chapter alone you were capable of creating such a mystery around kaoru's character. I simply loved it .

I hope that one day you would bless us with another chapter :)

I hope that one day you continue this story. It's a really interesting idea, not often do people write stories as Kaoru as a viable fighter, and I like how you have made her not only a warrior, but a believable one at that. Great job :D

I know you haven't written on this in over 4 years and are in the process of writing a sequel to another story, but hopefully if you find the passion for this story again it would be nice to see how you chose to develop it.

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Jackson

OMG~ This first chapter is amazing. I think it has potential to be an epic story. I know there's a lot on your plate right now though so it probably won't be updated anytime soon but... hopefully you will keep this story in mind when you have time to write more chapters! I would like to be able to read more of this story.

I'm really curious about who Kaoru is ... what Kyoshiro meant by helping her one last time and what is the thing that he gave her.

I don't know if you write Aoshi x Kaoru but a triangle between Aoshi x Kaoru x Kenshin would make a great story

Will be waiting to read more~ Love this idea for a story.

I was surprised by all the reviews in a simple ONESHOT.

It deserved it. Congratulations.

Another brilliant piece. It would be a shame if this is abandoned! The plot is excellent.

Wow this is brilliant! Loved the detailed descriptions and how Kenshin and Kaoru met.I'm guessing that Kenshin will be the first one she speaks to? Bravo! Can't wait for the next chapter.

hi i simply love the way you write, its enchanting i could go on reading forever! please do update, you havent updated any of your fics as of late :(

two years since you have written this and a year since you have written, or posted. one worries when such gifted and talented authors have stopped doing what they do so well. i sincerely hope you are safe, healthy, successful and happy. i also would love to see you writing again and i'm sure there are a whole lot of people who would like that too.

this story (beginning) has so many unsolved mysteries and unresolved issues, i am hoping that some day you will write/post more of your work and possibly finish some of your wonderful starts (like this one).

thank you,

ginny

... So Kaoru's mute? When did THAT happen!

Please, update soon! I'm already curious!

~The Fluffy Muffin Queen (obey my fluffy goodness/golden-brown authority!)

i like how all

this is going

but how come

kaoru doesnt

talk i would

like to read

more of dis

story

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Are you thinking of continueing this story?

I would be interested to see where it develops.