| Reviews for Aboard a Fairytale |
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  Guest chapter 16 . 5/25/2019 I extreme hate Draco in this story. The reason for their breakup was infidelity. He purposely sought out a woman, with intentions to hurt and cheat.. and when he suddenly realised there was a misunderstanding, he tried to find Hermione but he continued to be with another woman. And then he expects her to take him back? What an idiot. Where is his loyalty? There is no character development with Draco as he keeps making the same awful decisions. So far, he has not proven himself worthy nor has he changed with his womanising ways. Where Hermione has not been with a man since. It’s very frustrating to read. At least give Hermione a good man that stands by her while Draco fcks around. D claims he would die for H yet can’t even keep his dck in his pants for her. He’s all talk and full of sht. It’s also hard to read. The part where Hermione suddenly became pregnant with her 2nd child baffled me to no end. And when I read in your A/N how that happened, I just couldn’t continue with this story anymore. I’m sorry it is just not for me. |
 jessicamakayla23 chapter 7 . 3/13/2019 Your story is very confusing to read |
| GreyEyedKunoichi chapter 22 . 8/23/2018 Okay, so the story's gone from "avg wizards and witches with magical problems and extremely vague explanations" to "Oh no! There's a powerful person who controls the seas!" and you hint severely that it happens to be Granger due to her miraculous recovery. So what? Hanson asks her for tea and Draco suddenly regains his senses? This story is vague, a bit disorganized and very rushed. if you could go back and add more details and flash it out it'd be an amazing read, but for the life of me I cannot continue. |
| reallyseaweed chapter 24 . 7/14/2018 So Draco met Hermione? |
| reallyseaweed chapter 23 . 7/14/2018 Well Draco didn’t remember Hermione |
| reallyseaweed chapter 21 . 7/14/2018 If you love that person enough, you will want happiness for that person more than your own. Let go. |
| reallyseaweed chapter 20 . 7/14/2018 Is Hermione suicidal? |
| reallyseaweed chapter 19 . 7/14/2018 Oh my Hermione. |
| reallyseaweed chapter 18 . 7/14/2018 So Draco forgot Hermione |
| reallyseaweed chapter 16 . 7/14/2018 Thank out for explaining how Darrian come to life. I was so not understanding it at all |
| reallyseaweed chapter 14 . 7/14/2018 Wow, Darrian was born now. |
| reallyseaweed chapter 13 . 7/14/2018 How is she pregnant? |
| reallyseaweed chapter 12 . 7/14/2018 Draco is not matured yet. He really didn’t trust Hermione enough to see that Damion is his kid. How is she pregnant ? |
| reallyseaweed chapter 11 . 7/14/2018 What happened? |
| reallyseaweed chapter 10 . 7/14/2018 Ohh Dean. |
