Back for another read and it's still one of the best fics I've ever read! Thank you for sharing!

Good story. The dialog was perfect for each character.

This was so astonishingly fantastic. Not rushed or dragging, exciting but not heartstopping, beautiful prose and emotion, lovely plot, great wrap up. I can't sing enough praise. Thank you so much for writing.

This is a really good and satisfying story, thank you so much

Great story you have captured the brothers relationship perfectly

Perfection! Very few authors have me laughing at the end of a good story rather than rolling my eyes at the cheesiness, but you managed to have me laughing at the end of yours. I will definitely check out your collab with Alice I, one of my favorite ff writers!

Whaaaa? And jusr when I thought the action was over...you reel me back in! I'm so enjoying this page-turner, and am especially enjoying seeing Charlie step up and be the hero.

The show is long gone but your stories keep them alive for me. I have everyone of your stories in my favorite folder but it occurred to me I have never left a review or designated them as a favorite on this site. That will end tonight.

I'm very sorry to hear you have been sick, and, believe me, I understand not being able to write when health is an issue. A new medication has made it hard for me, as well, and I have been fighting my way through writing another story for Numb3rs for several years.

Anyway, to the point, this is one of my favorite stories. Your portrayal of the Eppes family is so perfect I have imagined this as an episode many times. The emotions are so real, the story itself unique and well-written, and I have reread it so many times over the years I can actually remember some dialogue my heart.

Thank you for writing and posting this amazing story.

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Excellent work!

Wonderful, just wonderful! Exciting, riveting plot and plenty of emotion. The description of the bridge accident and the subsequent time in the water was unbelievably close to my worst nightmare. I had to throw another log on the fire and pull my throw onto all of my body - I just felt so cold!

You pulled it off again with this great story!

This was a wonderful story. The brotherly relationship between Don and Charlie was fun to read.

It is officially 4am where I am (and yes, I'm getting up to run at 7:30) and I simply had to finish all 20 chapters to have closure in my life. I am very impressed, and I have to admit that I literally laughed out loud at your witty writing. Incredible job!

This was an excellent story I really enjoyed it :)

Awesome. Just brilliant.