I... usually don't review completed fics... Because.. they're.. done and I'm a horrible person, but... I couldn't pass this up.

It was...

Fantastic XD

I'm usually not into AU or anything of the like, but... wow.

It was sweet, hot, funny... and oddly realistic while still maintaining the fiction feeling... if that makes ANY sense. Nonetheless, I am impressed.

BV

This was a fun read. I thought it highly amusing that 'Rufus' was the name of the dog. It was very funny and fun; great job.

Wow. Simply... amazing. I love your writing style. It's very elegant and you make the characters seem real. I LOVE IT!

Very interesting so far, I can't wait to read more!~

awe, that was so sweet and adorable, you should so write a sequal! XP

It took me a while to get back to fics that i've been keeping an eye out for. that's why this review is so late in coming. my apologies.

while i do find that the relationship between Cloud and Vincent had developed unbelievably fast from strangers to acquaintances to passionate lovers, i did enjoy reading the... (blushes)... make out scenes. To be honest, i was quite looking forward to more, but the story ended rather too abruptly for me with chapter 6. oh well, i'm sure you wanted to concentrate on your other fics, and it did give a nice happy ending to the story.

hope you continue writing. cheers.

Don't do this to me! Update, pretty please!

OMG I loved it, it was really good

aww yey that was a nice cute little story _

im glad vincent and cloud got to be togther in the end :D

Oh! IT's really really good. I like that you've made Vincent a little more aggressive which is different for a change. Update realy soon!

oh noes, after-sex discoveries of cloud and vinnie! Love it.

Oh I'll DEFINATELY credit you. You should feel honoured. It's been over a year since I wrote anything and published it. Last thing I did was in April of 05. So THANK you so much!

'it was during that impressive instant—that glitch in time between the two complete strangers—that things began to change.'

I was wondering if you would mind if I use this quote as an opening line toa christmas ficlet I'm doing

hehe, nothing says high class party like getting caught...hehhe, loved the chapter

Insanely hott and insanely well written. Your interactions/dialouge is very good. Seriously: so into this. And really, you need to update when you can. Thank you for writing .:hearts:.