Very cute story! Love the pairing they are one of my favorites

Damn he drives hard bargain

I had always loved kyoharu 3 loved this story. The change of authors can clearly be seen in the last few chapters. But it's fine. Wouldnt want it to just end up hanging in ch 17. Thank you kuron for finishing this story. Wraith did a really great job, too. Much less OOC than in kimi no koe, in my opinion. :)

Awesome fan fiction!

This was a very good emotional roller-coaster of a story. I'm glad you wrote it, and I really liked the intellectual parts.

Hm I'm guessing from the last few chapters pacing that you lost some steam for this piece. It's understandable though. It makes me sad that the whip cracking smartness from the initial few chapters has seemingly diminished over the course of this story. This most likely doesn't matter at all to you now after 7 years. Afterall, I am just an avid reader with a bunch of opinions nothing more. I'll be stopping here for now. Thank you for the story in any case!

hmm I was expecting more bite from Haruhi. To be honest this chapter didn't do it for me. It felt forced but given the author note above I suppose it was to garner reviews and viewership to please the rabid fanbase at the time this was written. Oh well it doesn't matter now its been years since this was completed, lol.

oh my...that chapter finish though :O

I love the pure intelligence that is reflected through the word play between Haruhi and Kyouya. It fleshes out the characters so much more and always leaves me contemplating on their actions and choices by the end of each chapter.

Wow. I never thought about chairs, doors and laptops in that perspective. I notice sometimes that when I don't write for a long period, that my hand shakes and my handwriting is kind of strange. I will read that book. It seems a good reading. Oh, I love story so far.

Perfect. This story was perfect, and I think it showed the relationships within the club really well, as well as how they all feel about Haruhi. Very rarely do I see a story that sells me on a pairing like KyoyaxHaruhi, but this one really works. I think you've captured the two of them brilliantly, and seeing as Kyoya is my favorite character, that's saying a lot!

rotten water melon

I've just finished reading all of this, and I am amazed. This has such a brilliant storyline, and it's so captivating. I loved the random science parts. :)

That happens so much to me. I'm about to say something, but change my mind at the last second.

this is amazing and i thank you for finishing it. Thank you so much... they finally understand and i just... I can't tell u how happy i am that this happened.