Wow! Really well written and well thought out. Would've been a beautiful and poignant way for the show to have gone. A pity they didn't.

Loved it!

Very good story I think.

This episode was one of the most powerful I think. I am in the end of the third season now so I haven't seen all the others... but so far this one was damn good... :o)

You did a nice job writing this. You captured both characters in very right way.

Great story I really liked it.

That episode, and its aftermath, produced so many little currents and undertoes of emotion and speculation. I'm very pleased that you shared this one.

very well told.

Nice tag to the episode.

Great fic. I think I commented on this on your LJ, but just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. It would have been wonderful to see in the show...but I can wish.

great fic!

I really enjoyed this...

To let us see something afterwards..how it affects him and the people around him,,in this case Teyla...it's easy to tell by this story even if it's been just a short while they truly have something together,

So a great fic,thanks for sharing it...I enjoy anything with good J/T in it..

Beautiful. A wonderful look at the after-effects of that episode not only on John but on those close to him also. Descriptive and evocative, this was a really lovely fic.