Reviews for Finding Common Ground
Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2018
Charlie is too hard on himself... A case of "well, he was nice to me that one time, so that undoes what he did wrong later" -not. That's not how it works...
Cutter12 chapter 5 . 4/27/2012
Just finished reading your story and now I am sitting here in a puddle of tears. Thanks for writing this.
csimesser1 chapter 5 . 1/15/2010
that was good lvoed it
supergirl3684 chapter 5 . 6/19/2007
So Cool! I think Don forgiving his father would be a great story line for the show because it's obvious that there's an under line resentment there! Great job!
Sushi Chi chapter 5 . 11/1/2006
Wow. I really liked this one. It was fantastic. Definite favorite.
luvnumb3rs chapter 5 . 9/6/2006
What a great ending!
Mel J1701 chapter 5 . 9/6/2006
Nice, emotional insight into the characters. I liked the resolution that the brothers realised it was their parents who really led to the problems between them and Alan was able to admit that and be grateful for Don's forgiveness. Look forward to see what you have in store for Don in your next story!
maurbill chapter 5 . 9/6/2006
So sad, another one ends. But the bright side is you are going to do another. A Don whumping one no less. I will be anxiously awaiting that one. Thanks again for this story as well as all your others. I know I really appreciate the time and effort you make in writing these and also being so darn prompt with the updates. I will be watching for the next one.
maurbill chapter 4 . 9/6/2006
This chapter is really power packed with emotion. I love the way you make the reader almost feel the same emotions as Charlie. I recently went back and reread all of your Numb3rs stories and each and every one of them truly shows your great writing abilities. I love all you stories and can't wait for the next chapter of "Finding Common Ground" as well as the stories for Numb3rs you will do in the future. Terrific job. Also, Numb3rs Season Three is rapidly approaching and I am sure everyone on this board is counting down the days till Sept. a couple more weeks and then HURRAY!
luvnumb3rs chapter 4 . 9/4/2006
Glad to see another chapter. IT WAS EXCELLENT AS USUAL!
luvnumb3rs chapter 3 . 9/3/2006
Excellent chapter. Now even though it did shwo birthdays on their pictures it has never been stated when they were born I believe it was Cheryl or Nick who has said that was the prop guys who put those dates on there. THey had nothing to do with it. On the show I do believe that it has been stated that they are around 5 years apart because Charlie was 13 which would make Don any where from 17 to 19 depending on his birthday. I graduated at 17 almost 5 months before my 18th birthday where as my brother was 18 with only a month to his. But again great story an can't wait for the rest.
knadineg chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
In my opinion, I think it could end with just one more chapter. These two have been great, but I don't think it needs to much more to it. Great job, though!
Magnificently-In-Love chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
heya! I like the idea of two more flashbacks it's your call though cause your the author! Great job this story is just so good!
maurbill chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
Another chapter. I was so excited to see this up. As usual, and I am sure I must be sounding pretty boring, but you did a great job with this. Every time I log on the first thing I do is check to see if you have something up. You are without a doubt one of the really great writers on this site, as well as a few others that I take the time to review, because their stories are so good. Good work kiddo, keep them coming.
Timespirt chapter 2 . 9/1/2006
Hi,

I say keep going.

Thank You

Timespirt
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