Reviews for One Summer's Day
Yuri Namikaze1 chapter 14 . 10/28/2018
A great story, it’s a shame we don’t get to see the outcome. I’d have loved to see your version of Sasuke being brought back to Konoha.
Yuri Namikaze1 chapter 11 . 10/24/2018
Well, that’s probably the last thing you want to hear before you go fight... Poor Naruto, I’ve never really liked Sakura anyway -shrug-. He should go find Hinata (or Sasuke I ship that too lol)
Yuri Namikaze1 chapter 7 . 10/19/2018
Loving this story so far! I had to take a break to study, but now, I’m able to read it again :D
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
warn on yaio
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
Ok, Kakashi was 14 when the kyuubi attacked. Fourteen! Why the FUCK would anyone expect an almost suicidally depressed 14-year-old boy who just lost the last person he truly felt connected with to take care of his teacher's infant son?! Why on earth is taking care of Naruto so much more important than Kakashi's mental and physical state? Seriously, he was still a child himself! Also, your Minato is VERY out of character. But, I guess, you wouldn't know as you wrote this in 2006 or whatever. Ah, well.
Sanity Demolisher chapter 13 . 7/15/2013
Interesting story! Thanks for sharing. I don't know if you're planning on getting back to this story but I'd be interested to see where you take it if you do. :)
CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 13 . 6/23/2011
wow drama post more soon !
MugetsuIchigo chapter 13 . 5/1/2011
yeah...can't wait for summer vacation! i forgot what happened in the previous chapters though...update soon!
DarkRavie chapter 13 . 5/1/2011
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Gohanzgirl chapter 12 . 2/7/2011
Wonderful writing! I look forward to the next chapter!
Miracle Of Oracles chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Ooooh! Snap,Minato is mad! X3 I love it how he's yelling one minute,and then he's grinning the next!
Miracle Of Oracles chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
'"O.K…" said Naruto once more, suddenly getting a flash of Kakashi in an apron that said 'Worlds Greatest Mom' on it.'

Lmao,I could totally imagine that! XD

This chapter was awe-someeee~! Keep updating!
InARealPickle chapter 12 . 2/4/2011
They are winning... so something must be wrong? I suppose you are trying to build up tension in the story, but it isn't working. Their dialog was confusing at best. it made no sense. Perhaps it will next chapter.
DarkRavie chapter 12 . 2/4/2011
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Amber Ice Fox chapter 11 . 11/29/2010
Wow, the ending of this chapter was unexpected...
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