where did it tickle?

loved it lol

This is cute, it is so like Ino to attack Shikamaru when she found him being ticklish.

I'll say, if this is your first tickling fic, then you have potential for writing this type of story. The pair kissing at the end was cliche, but I guess it can slide since you twisted said ending into another kind of tickling session. (I encourage fluffy, mischievous, innocent tickles rather than tickling sessions that pair people up into couples.)

Critic-wise, I'd say you have two big flaws: the story's pace was rushed, and the end was abrupt. I feel that in both cases you could have drawn them out so the story could be better savoured. Plot-wise, you made a good excuse for Ino to get to tickle Shikamaru. You did surprisingly well in writing this all out, too - I find few spelling mistakes, and you master sentence structure.

All in all, this was a great story. Your 48 reviews are proof of that

Yah. Normally a ShikaTem fan, but this works too!

Love it :3

It's good. And cute, and funny, and stuff. I like it.

Crazy adorable! I was grinning the whole time I was reading it. :)

Hay that was really good no joke...next u shud write a naruto and sakura one and email me on Facebook to let me no wat the name of it is...my name is Kacie Bullard

DAWWW that was so cute! I liked it. I like how you wrote it. The characters stayed in character. You're a good writer. :)

Congratimilations

Loved it! I really like these kinda fics for some reason

oh well i guess they are gonna be late for training anyway :P

Omg I loved that story! I wish somthin like that would happen to me

Nice! Love it, really :)

Aw so cute! I love fluff! *_

ShikaIno4eva!