Upon re-reading, this still leaves me with an unsatisfying sense of "Huh?".

Things seem to only ever go from bad to worse for Harry/David/Dafydd. Then to leave it off at a point where he's presumably about to die because the conditions of his second Choice just won't come about... that's just cruel. To the reader as much as to your main character.

And then there is that ton of open questions! How can Remus be Danny's father if they've never had sex? Why can he stay in touch with Ron, but not his husband, father and mentor? Does Dumbledore actually not realize that Dafydd is David, and if so, which spell is causing it? ...And quite a few more.

Winding down: I really loved the beginning of this story, but the sequel is frustrating me. Once for its clip-notes style and bad formatting; then because I've taken David into my heart and I want to see him happy, dammit!

If possible, please do something about that. More updates would be really appreciated.
- Dime

Love it. Update soon.

Sorry to say it, but this chapter is a disaster. Terrible punctuation, poor structure, and not enough description-of scene or characters. And the story as a whole lacks order and cohesiveness. I'm quite disappointed after reading the first part of this story (the prequel).

This chapter was a little hard to read; last chapter you mentioned the sleeping children and then in the beginning of this chapter. What is Wilfred choice? Umb*tch being minister? All this little side pieces that don't really add up to anything.

Please continue great story

Hello!

I like your stories. So are you going to continue this story?
PLEASE!

Victoria

So when are we getting the rest of this story. I would really like to know about why David left at the end of the last story.

I really enjoyed D and D. Will you continue this unique series?

Are we ever going to learn what happened to David and why he left Remus?

Okay... what happened to quotation marks and punctuation in this chapter? That looks more serious than the usual fanfic net formatting issues. Maybe edit it sometime?

- Dime

please continue

lol! poor minerva, actually being forced to appreciate divination! love the fic! please update soon!

okay...still confused but its well written ]

Please if you are not going to update your stories send me the reason why Harry/David left Remus and that he is dead!

Ok, great couple of chapters, and i loved the prequel to this story. Hope you decide to get back to this and finish it up. Especially since you had the chance to wrap it all up nicely during the last story! But yeah. Thanks for the stories. Hope you're doing ok.