I like the ghost and the kimono imagery here. 3 Beautiful interplay. This ship is still a favorite for me. ;)

Very deep and very poetic.

omg! this is amazing. it's really descriptive and surprisingly poetic. I loved it and you really are a great writer

I really like the way you portrait Orochimaru and Sasukes relationship. How Sasuke is a fragile beautiful doll.

Love how you use the language so beautifully.

Amazing job!

very deep.

very hot.

I cannot get enough of OroSasu, and it makes me so happy when I come across something I have not yet read and it is so wonderful it makes me want to squee in an undignified manner.

Just so you know, your story was wonderful. And I did squee. ;)

Finally a good OroSasu fic! I can see their relationship play out like this, it makes sense! Thank you for thinking to write it! _

It’s always refreshing to come across something here that is well written and well put together. I love the descriptive style of your writing and the story idea is interesting and original.

The only thing I would add is a bit more detail to the smut scenes, but only because I have a perverted mind! _

I love it!

absolutely flawless! i only wish it was longer because orosasu is my favorite pairing... but excellent work! and thanks for writing this; there isn't nearly enough orosasu fics out there... i adore your writing style and description of events; you even kept the character personality in a fic. just keep writing please!

I loved it! You're an excellent writer, and you managed to describe them and their relationship in a very believable way. I definitely think something like this actually happened between them... even though we'd never see it in canon of course

Wow, I loved your story. I'm a cosplayer and now I really want to make this one of my projects. If I ever get it completed, I'll send pictures.

My goodness, I absolutely love your descriptions and how you wrote the way both men viewed their actions.

This was truly remarkably writen. Keep up the good work.

Very fluid and entertaining. I love your style, and Sasuke's POV was very easy to get into.

This is going into my favorites.

With your writing, I could feel the intensity of Sasuke’s emotions; how with out Naruto he craved a sent that only Orochimaru could provide him. I could feel how that sent made Sasuke want all the more, and how it lingered with him all the time, never forgetting it. This was so well written, and I hope to see more writing like this. Great job, this defiantly is going to my favorites.

~Meagan