What kind of lemon is THAT!? But good story.

your romanic is so awesome you should teach me some lessons. ")

OFMG AWSOME !:)

That was the worst thing in history

tht was hot
not lying

wow

Short and too the point. Not bad. Could have put some more detail into the love making part. Other than that, it was good.

A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and

he

said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and

he

said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and

...once

again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f...ace the...

... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said... You're not pretty

you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be

with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...

~~THE END~~ ...Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your

true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to

you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,

outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your

life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10

relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15

pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.

-

Emos gotta love

stupid but good

errrm it was good but you could make it a bit longer i liked the end part lol

This is an awesome story is there anymore to it cuse i love it now

since when did sly became spider man O_o

Hey that was a really good story I loved it :D

rolf

...I did not really understand this. At all. The format was definitely off, and it just wasn't completely clear. I don't know who Sly is or why he had these freaky super human abilities to jump on roofs. But I know that if you were to actually give more detail, and change the format, it might turn out well.