the dr. sounds really ugly

it seems like Hikaru fell in love with Kaoru

it alsp seems like Kaoru has been in love with Hikaru

umm, it's a good story but i don't understand why it's rated M or the ending either. but whatever, goodjob

*mew* they r soo cute together!

This is an amazing fan fic! It is extremely well written, and it certainly keeps the reader entertained. You have used interesting and wonderfully descriptive words and the plot is so awsome! I love OHSHC and out of all the Hikaru/ Kaoru fan fics that I have read so far, yours is the best.

Awsome! Funny! Terrificly written! Completly enjoyable to read! I really really really really like it!

this is a very good fic. please update soon

I hope you update soon!

This is perfect! I love how you portray Hikaru & Kaoru's characters, it's just amazing. I hope you update soon, it has been a while!

Ooh, the suspense. Not action-ey suspense (I'm so eloquent), but emotional suspense. Gorgeously done fic, and I'd definitely read more. :D

Interesting. Very interesting. I think this story has potential. Keep it up.

Ooh this is intriguing...so very intriguing. And you haven't updated in 5 MONTHS? xD (Like I'm one to talk...) But seriously, I do look forward to reading more of this. I love how you describe their silent communication with each other.

-Michiru

Ohohohoho I simply cannot wait to see what would happen next...though I think I may have several ideas... XD

Lol, I was cackling with glee when I got to the end of the chapter!

Jaa! This story is ABSOULTLY AMAZING! *bows* Keep up the awsome work!

That was awsome... I loved it!

KT

I love the way you write. Sorry for the delay, but a very intriguing chapter indeed.