Great work! I liked your writing and Winry's characterization. She is definitely someone overlooked in a lot of fics (being a support character or just simply Ed's lover/wife/gf). But you did her a lot of justice in this fic and I thoroughly enjoyed that.

And so it ends, very well! Thanks, I enjoyed your fic very much. :) Having come to FMA well after it was completed I still have to wrap my head around fics like this one that were written before the entirety of canon was established. I liked your Winry and definitely think she was always capable of becoming a strong and compassionate leader. Hope things are well in your world and that you are still finding enjoyment in creative endeavours. Cheers!

I think you did very well. Plausibly awkward and sincere. More about the characters and their relationship than the gooey mechanics of sex, and that's where the heart is. Much Kudos 3

I just want to say I've had a nagging doubt about Earnest for awhile. idk...

Nicely written fight. This played out in my head very well. :) Winry seems so fatigued and confident and victorious in this moment. Wonderful blend.

Love the bits between Winry and Riza here and in the last chp. And this is rocking along! Fantastic.

Ed's realisation that Winry is 'moving beyond him' is true and beautiful and sad all at once. And I think you've nailed the response of Paninya, Garfiel and Pinako. These people would accept Winry no matter what and also be honestly curious about the nature of her wings. Beautifully written!

I like seeing how people handle writing The Truth, and I like this. Winry sticking it to Truth is priceless.

Well, that's a bit terrifying.

Hi, I'm just getting into your fic and really enjoying it. Thanks. I really like in this chapter that you have given Angel's cohort jobs and individual identity.

This is an amazing story and could not have been better! I'm just sad it had to come to an end!

Love it. Especially the fact that you made Winry think that shooting father in the face with her fire was a cheap shot a cheap side we getting him in the crotch. The stories great ,characters are awesome ,this cool experimental Winry ,amazing.

That was fabulous! Thanks for such a great story :)

I think you did this perfectly...though I have some concerns with Ed's transmuted condom LOL!

Random thought...not exactly sure how chimera transmutations work as far as DNA and genetics and science go, but is Winry still human enough to have children with Ed in the future? Will they have wings too or is the bird DNA somehow separate and wouldn't transfer? Interesting to think about!

I have absolutely no problem with you writing in some Ling/Ran Fan :)