This was very creative!

Hey Lady Slash...why don't you take a gander over to Hogwarts and get some Drarry action going, yeah?

Oh. My. God. This described the Mary Sues so well and as for Lady Slash? Brilliant.
"Not that Disney is homophobic, you understand...,"
I just about died. This is one of the few parodies I've ever read that I found hilarious and sarcastic without ever being annoying...and those last few lines...I have GOTto stop breaking out laughing in public places...thank God someone else shares my opinion on Mary Sues! They ruin a fanfic!
I wish I had Lady Slash's power...starts daydreaming and then shakes head.
Aaaanyway...

This was hilarious. Loved it!

This was Awesome! I love your story! AWESOMELY AWESOME! I want to read more of Mary Sue and Lady Slash's adventures.
Mars

Omg this is GOLD LOL I got for Lady slash all the way omg I hate Mary Sues I'm not so into authors putting their Oc's and just tearing everything up. Man freaking AGent Canon, sometimes you love him(not really not always not even sometimes) sometimes you hate him(...I guess) and then theirs Mr. Disney it suck it turned homophobic but this was worth reading I swear! Than, you for the good humor!

Haha LOL. Awesome.

Hahahaha, loved this! Especially Agent Canon XD Great writing!

nice one! this is very funny. i like it.-

lovelove

I laughed...and laughed...and then Agent Canon came in...and I fell of the chair with "not that Disney is homophobic...".

Well done is an understatement :D

Ahaha ; this is hillarious. xD

Hogwarts . . . that would be rather interesting.

this is pure genius! mary sue, lady slash, and agent canon just officially made my day! -

Ha! Not bad, not bad t'all.

This was so much fun. Came here after reading your Hetalia story, to see if I could find some more fan-fic. Love a good parody.