I'm a little baffled as to why you haven't gotten any reviews for this. Does no one else have any love for li'l Kel Algwinn?

Regardless, this was very succinct, but at the same time, it had a feeling of depth and didn't seem rushed. Kel seems like he'd have the hidden potential you show him using when he takes down the Sith hunting him. And the bits of Mandalorian culture you presented felt natural. His adoption into the Ordo clan is certainly something few would probably think up, but you wrote it well.

Interesting point, how neither the Jedi nor Sith philosophy really work realistically outside some kind of static ideology.

So, the tall cousin that Kel met once is Malak? And his cousin's friend was Revan? Nice touch.

Thumbs up! ;)