This was nicely done. This story gave me a couple of laughs along the way, too.

I particularly enjoyed the interaction between Matt and Lita. In my opinion, you had Matt acting the way that one reading may actually expect him to act in that given situation.

I think you did a good job with this.

-DeepKiss

I loved the story. I like how everything ended. It was really cute. Nice Job.

That was really cute. I liked it alot.

I like it. I'm interested to see where it goes from here.

Cool story. I like it so far. Nice idea. Update soon!

Flames Out

Dragon

Interesting. Can't wait for the update.

I don't know why but what Edge did made me laugh and say "he is so cute." I loved it! I'm excited for what happens next.

I like it. I hope you update soon!

This is an interesting beginning. I'm curious to see where this goes. So far, so good.

-DeepKiss

I like this. It should be interesting were you take it.