Very realistic, an enjoyable read...and not too awkward!

Ah the first awkward encounter this was breathtakingly beautiful.

Good job.

this gives me life.
I don't have enough words to thank you. Leroux!E/C is TOUGH for the writer but I have a mighty need!

Well, that was pretty much the best fluff ever. I like that you kept this realistic. You also struck a good balance with the amount of detail, which is very difficult with sexual writing.

*smiles* That was well done. You captured the awkwardness and embarrassment well. Their mutual hesitation was perfect, as was their rather grim determination to make it work. That's probably exactly what would have happened for him, poor man, but I like how you had him laughing. The paragraph with her smiling was lovely, as were their words to each other. Loved the ending.

Very good,innocentt aand touching

Aww aww aww! I loved it! It was awkward yes but still sweet and loving and just...yes. More sensual than sexy but still it worked. :) I'm sorry I'm not terribly coherent, but my feelings for this fic cannot accurately be described in words. I think "warm and fuzzy" is the closest i can get. Good job! _

It may not sound right, but... it's a lovely, sweet story. After ALW Phantom seems to have morphed into "Adonis, virginal sex god figure". But to me, he's more worshiping the ideal of Christine, the ideal of love, of having Christine as a living bride. The situation is kinda like in fairy tales where the heroes married and lived happily ever after, where there's no mention of sex and married life.

I thought the story was sweet and had a lovely ending. It made me smile actually, a job well done :)

I read this when I was new to POTO, and I've loved it ever since! Just a quaint, little one-shot; but. I think it really sums them up ;)

Beautyful. Because it is not like other Fanfictions, but how it could have been. Great job!

I find this very sweet.
Love it. :)

Wow, that certainly was awkward! Great job with the composition. It made the whole tenseness of both their respective circumstances really come to life. Great job!

This was on top of a list of recommended reading for me, and I enjoyed it! I'm new to the poto fanfic scene, but that just means I'm blessed that there is so much quality stuff! Like this!