Reviews for Ask Me To Stay |
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MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 1 . 7/11/2016 oh dear gods, my heart! T_T |
letusdeleteaccounts chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 This piece was sweet, but a bittersweet. I didn't realise this was a genuine scene cut from the movie; they should have kept it :( Or they should have let him go to her world like Medusa did. As for your story though, I really liked it. I think maybe it was a little over-emotional on Miranda's part, but apart from that (and that Sebastian's an elf), it was very well done :) |
washingtongirl-91 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 ok so i read all of the voyage of the Unicorn stuff and you do a great job! i love it especially the miranda and sebastian stuff however i noticed in all your storys you say that sebastian is a dwarf, in the start of the movie (i just watched it two seconds ago) Malachi: "i am Malachi and this is Sebasitan, we're Dwarfs" Sebasitan: "correction, i'm an Elf he's a Dwarf" Malachi: "and this, Professer Ainsli, is your ship." Ainsli: "My ship?" Malachi: "Yes and my i suggest we board" *spear thrown and bearly misses Malachi* "immedietly." or something along those lines... anywho so you get were i am going with this he is a elf not a dwarf or he would have the crazy eyebrows like malachi:) the point was though i love the fluff you have with the two of them i wanted way more of that in the movie and i am glad someone else saw what it was missing:) thank you for writing such great storys ps..this is not suppose to be a flame so i hope it dosent come off like that:) |
Angel in the Morning chapter 1 . 7/16/2009 I really liked this. I think you caught the attitudes of all of the characters really well. Good job. You should write more with them. |
Laura Grey chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 Aw poor Sebastian... they should be together : 3 |
Amashelle chapter 1 . 1/25/2009 This one flowed a lot better than the last one I reviewed. I was disappointed that they cut this scene from the movie, so it was nice to read your take on it. I especially like that Malachi was so annoyed at Prof. Aisling for interrupting. It was a nice little note that really caught the dynamic among all the characters. |
pimidawg chapter 1 . 4/16/2008 i love it it was so sad, but i really think you should make another chapter, where sebastian comes into miranda's world |