im probly sounding stupid, but i absolutely love this story

it makes me think, what if this really happened? where would the story go from here?

anyway, love it

Nice descriptive writing. I can literally watch it in my mind.

Good concept, and I don't see any problems with it.

Great job!

That was so beautifully written, I can't describe it. Awesome.

Woah. Crack pairing, but beautifully written. I love your style of writing.

Wow... I'm totally speechless... that was stunning, brilliant... your writing is poetic prose, so vivid and beautiful... you're astounding! This was fantastic!

Damn.

That's all I can say, really. It's weird, because I never thought I would read anything like this. It's odd, but in a really cool way. Hrm, I'm beginning to confuse myself now, so just ignore me, and know that I think it's cool. .

Ah, this story is refreshing, grotesque, and unique. Lady Yunalesca is cold, like myself. Lord Saruman the Great is most satisfied with this tragic tale.

Wow. This is amazing stuff! The writing was so beautiful! Very..erm..peotic? Yup..guess thats the . And u say ur might not be a good writer? (in ur profile) Lol. I beg to differ :) Reading this fic was such a pleasure! Im abit sad that Rikku had to die tho. Lol.

I havent played FF8 before ..thats where Leviathan is from rite? Anyways, i dont really now what Leviathan is..but from the looks if of, its definitely sumthing really cool. :P

Loved how you used (nicknames?) for the characters instead of their real names. Took me awhile to realise who Faythling was. Lol. Was really an amazing touch!

Afetr reading this, im SO going to read the rest of ur fics. :)

Keep up the great work!

Blessed be!

-Bacafreak-

Woah...that was...so cool! XD! I loved it! :) Can't wait to read more!

This is my brain melting out my ears again. Your writing is such beautiful, exquisite poetry and sensuality when you let yourself go. There are so many disturbing, gemlike phrases and images in the building of Rikku's Aeon, all that snapping ribs together and water and "she bleeds oxygen". Also, you've done one of those magic tricks: I loved Leviathan in 8, and now I will always think of Rikku when I play that game and see that GF, because of you! Thank you.