Great fanfiction, it really is amazing written.

But I have to wounder, why California? People are always saying how cali is so great, but I've lived here my whole life, and I don't see whats so great about it O.o

Once again I realize you wrote this eons ago, but I had to comment.

It was a sweet sad little fic, but mostly I just liked Trent driving a Nova. Great old car there.

good story. sad thuogh, but good. i feel that way sometimes. i am a fan of yours, by the way, and would like advice on a fic of my own (by the way, springsteen is pretty cool)

Oh I LOVE this! It's really very true to many people! :)

I had skin like leather and the dimond hard look of a cobra/I was born blue and waethered but burst just like a supernova/ I could walk like Brando right into the sun Then dance just like a Casanova...

interesting, ...it provoked a couple of thoughts while I read. Something like this would have made for an even better story if it had been longer I think.

Kind of depressing, but it was good.

Ja

Simple enough, but I still think the title would be more appropriate for a "Jane" story...

That was good! you should write a sequel!

technical writing proficiency-5

story- -10

nice story

kinda cheesy though

man, that was beautiful...i love it when characters have life in them. i haven't been able to write them like that. everyone's always so dead in my fanfics, calloused and dry and desperate. i love the desperation daria has here. more young people need to feel it these days and to get out of it.