since when is hermione such an idiot? the first prime number is 2(though some people say its 1 but nobody says 3)

Again, if this is part of a series, feel free to correct me. Seriously, an alter ego for Harry but nothing to explain the reaction people in KNOCKTURN have to him. Come on, seriously?

I don't know if this is a part 2 in a series but if it isn't then the author needs to stop randomly announcing things Harry has/has done without giving any more info. Like randomly saying Harry has a fortune in crystals but we are not even given a flashback of anything how he got his fortune.

Idk if your going for your own personalities for people like Hermione but if your trying to keep them canon, they are nowhere near accurate

Liked the first chapter, disliked this one, too much snarling and whatnot, are they dogs or people ?

Harry much so

oh damn this is so bad.. so many blank spaces not knowing things. Like i said earlier heavy occ. Harry is so much doing on is own without hermione, how can there relationship/wedding last like that. Cause of that lockheart could get to her, and those 3 months in prison anything could have happend to her. Dumb shit head and fucked writing.
Letting things play out how it should.. yeah right he changes everything already only making harder on him, should have killed dumbles already sjeesh!

i am by page 12 and have to stop here to wait a while before i even want to read the rest.
Yes heavy occ fine! you got some sort of original story but fucks it up rather bad..
Jumping all over the place, leaving things out it, thinking to be clever than the rest while being to arrogant/confident makes stupid decisions. But leaving hermione out of a lot of things, neglecting her, and more to unforgivable letting her in freaking danger in the damn room with the stone is not what harry would do!

Please continue

It says complete! I liked it, not loved, only because they are grey in a dark world. If there was a sequel dealing with Riddle & explaining the red eyes in the forest, it would be complete then!

Love the Tonks chapter.

With Luna being a seer or Destiny, Francine would be better now, fleur later on.

I really loved this chapter. A bit funny & a bit mate, both feeling the veela effects.

With everything that you have done, unless this was false, Neville should not have been able to do that. Of course if it is the reason to not join Neville, it works.

OK; as this is an AU time travel, or spirit travel, you put a logical reason for it all, but I thought you mentioned demon somewhere!