Aw.. This is so cute! I love the way you portrait their relationship, it's so sweet. They're lovers but still best friends, I love that kind of relationship.

Aww that was so sweet and cute! X3

You did this in one hour? but it's amazing! i really loved it :D

You did this one in one hour? Amazing.
Well, I liked it. Good work!

Wow...this was great for one hour! In fact, it's amazing! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!

Very sweet story. I like your style where everything is clear and images are sound.

Awww! That was sweet-and really cute at the same time. I'm having so much fun reading your fics. You write so well, all the character details and the little quirks that make the stories so real.

Cliche or not I really liked it. Great fic, to my favourites XD

Loved it! Thanks for taking the time to write and post this. :) :) :)

For one hour this is beautiful and detailed Sensei! It's completly wonderful! I'm gonna check out full version on AFF in a few minutes, also, I love how you always tell stuff from Zoro's persepective, like how that wound was nothing but a scratch...and than tell what it really looks like. You did that a lot in RUMBLE! and I absoulutely loved it, it showed more of Zoro's character and personailty that way. Also...I bet Nami will just lo~ve the treasure they brought home -snicker- And how can you be disappointed Sensei! No writer should be disappointed by their works, just like no shipwright can deny thier ships. (See, I used a Water 7 thing there) Each work gives us more experiance, and the review give us chances to improve Sensei! Although, you already know that! Hehe, I haven't read Coral Reef yet...I think I may have too though haha!

~~Kit

you wrote this in an hour? but it's good!

aw, a pity they didn't get to play, no? heehee

KYA! THAT LAST PART WAS SO CUTE! XD GREAT STORY!

I hope Luffy and Zoro are going to be okay...

Despite the fact that you really should not have edited the story so many times this was really good.

Haha, I love it!