I could spot the usage of symbolism, and it was skillfully done.

This is quite the masterful oneshot.

hi there

i really liked the story, i hope you'll write more :)

but... i really did not get that snow-meliting-drop-thing there, i'm sorry :( can u probably explain that to me? again, i'm sorry...

we're talkin bout symbols in lit right now, but i don't get thse symbols in here, sorry. mayb i'll reread it then.

but very good, thank you! poor kratos, wantin to talk to his son but he can't. sigh

aw! that was so sweet! Poor Kratos. Poor Lloyd!

I love KratosxLloyd fics! And yours is very delicate and really well written. _ Good job!

hello i love your story! but, I didn't unterstand the fing with the snows molten in the Lloyd's hand it's probably because I'm french... so, if you can explain me with simple words, it would be really friendly

thanks

Symbolism is a beautiful thing.

That was truly beautiful. I loved it so much. Fatherson bonding is just awesome and you make a smashing example of someone who can take a metaphor and throw it into the mix of articulate beauty.

Again, loved it.

Love and kisses,

MBOM

Cool.

Yay Kratos.

The piece is nicely written.

*stares in a daze*

Geez... are you sure you don't write for a living? That was so... I can't even find the word I'm looking for. Not 'professional-like', 'clean', or 'wonderfully written' by themselves... but kind of a mix of all of them, with a really big emotional punch that only a ToS fan would really be able to appreciate. You always wrap everything up so nicely, too. I think that's a pretty rare quality in a writer, especially when they do fanfiction.

Waiting for more Kratos/Lloyd goodness,

~Sapphire

Aww this is a really good oneshot! Probably one of the best. Yay! ok that's it I'm adding you to the my list of Saints for the Church of Lloyd! Lol ok you should write more like this! This is solid work ;)

That was perfect. I can't think of anything bad, everything was great. _

-'Sui-

Wow... It's like a cut scene! I can see it so clearly! Beautiful... so pristine...

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::is actually speechless for once::

Whoa! You're such a descriptive writer! Really I liked it a whole lot!

This is very nice. I love the way you write! It's so eloquent and descriptive. Just awesome.

As for the symbolism, I think I got it the moment I finished reading it. (I think I usually catch these things...)

Um, one was that "life-giving" phrase, meaning Kratos is Lloyd's father.

Also that I thought was nice that the drop is like an angel's tear.(Kratos cries for his mistakes...? That's what I understood)

Anyway, great story!

Ok, first for the not-so-great part of my review.

Um...why did you use "He continued leaving prints in the once flawless land." Shouldn't land be ground? Maybe it's just me, but land makes me think of a larger area.

Also, the author's note at the end was weird. It makes me wonder what symbolism was used in the story and then it makes me fustrated for the next few days because I can't figure it out. (I tend to think of things over time) And it just stands out weird.

Now, for the nice part.

Aw! This was so fluffy! And I got extremelyguilty!Kratos. Keep up the good work!