Your story is very intriguing. I was captivated, honestly. Also, it's a shame that you couldn't find the motivation or a way to end this, since your ending probably would've been satisfying. (I have literally dozens of pages filled with ideas for stories and absolutely no idea how to end them, so I have to admit I'm a little jealous that you could create an ending)

Well, thank you for the story!

Neville saw the gate - this is so interesting! I hope you update!

I DEFINITELY wasn't expecting the first lesson to go so wrong. I'm sure that scared the crap out of everyone. Apparently Aru hasn't been training enough! LOL.

I'm surprised Al explained it all, but I guess he had no choice if he wants to help Ed. Anyways, you're spot on with Dumbledore's character (as in him wanting to help people but would stick his nose in other's business). I like how Al is in this, too!

While I have not played Bluebird's Illusion, I have read some about it - and I love what you're doing with this! It's so unusual for Al to be the main character in a Harry Potter crossover (which sucks, Aru is my favorite xD). I'm glad I stumbled across this!

Um... What's BlueBird Illusion?

Aww, this is really good. Well, thanks for telling us and not leaving us hanging.

Though there is something I'm curious of. Maybe could I try and pick up this story? Re-write the first chapters a little so that I would be able to make later plot points and try and write it so that it doesn't die? I mean, it's to good to just die. So, honestly if I could have the chance to do it it would be awesome considering how awesome it is. So maybe, reply to it or PM me or something? Again, it would really be awesome.

Well, thank you for telling us how it was supposed to go. If someone else does end up continuing it, could you tell us? I'd like to see that.

Thank you for the story!

Ja ne!

~J. DCF

*GROAN* Ugh. NO! WHY!1?1 Okay, well thank you for at least telling us, and not leaving us hanging. I hope some day you find the inspiration to go back and add more...

I'm sad to read that you're not continuing, but I suppose it's for the best if you aren't ready to continue. I would take over, but I have my own story to focus on (I seriously need to get it finished before I take on other projects). I'm sorry.

I really like this story; so since you are abandoning this story can I pick this story up? Just PM me with your answer.

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Spartan058Linda

ooohh, how interesting~

good job ;)

w00t! Update please! I have never read a HP/FMA crossover with Al as the main character, or one with BBI in it, this is really good. YOU NEED TO UPDATE!

~Psycho

wow neville. you blabbermouth. al just told you like a second ago not to mention the gates to anyone and in the next scene you go and tell the trio... not that i don't like the golden trio but they are very snoopy. they'll definitely look through al's business. hopefully it won't really take a human sacrifice to bring ed back. please continue soon!

I like it! Poor Al... Do you have any ideas on where Ed's mind and or soul is since he's a veggie? Can you explain the little ghost Al? Anyway, wonderful job! I have always loved BBI fanfictions. Well done!