I really like this. It would be pretty cool if you did separate one-shots based on each characters thoughts on the death... That would be really interesting. :)

Incredible. Thats all there is to say- amazing.

-MEGGEM

Ignoring the fact that Maya is not Jack's only daughter- he has one named Hannah too, and that Elliot has a brother called Donny, this was a pretty good story. It was nicely written (although you missed out the 'n' in 'twins') and I liked it.

Erm...you do get this is supposed to be a COMEDY show right? This is an interesting viewpoint to take, but I'm afraid a series such as this, which is so deeply set as a comedy isn't really the best choice on which to attach your story. This might work on Buffy, Xena or a dozen other shows, but here it simply looks depressing and false.

Overall, I would suggest you study the show you are writing about a bit more next time, it seems alot like you don't have a clue about any of the characters or their personalities, and had you done that, it would have brought to life the emotions I believe you were looking for. Good luck on your next venture.

Nice Fic.

Jennie is also my creation, I don't know if Elliot even has any siblings

for your knowledge

And for the purposes of this fic, the fic is placed in modern times.I have no idea how the show ends or when it even ended.

shoot me ended in 2003.

Jennie is also my creation, I don't know if Elliot even has any siblings

2 Yes Elliot has a sibling. a brother, his name is Donny

Now You know.

Alrighty then!

Darkie has claws!