Plzzzzzzzzzz update !

"But he decided to pleasure her first, this was their first time after all…Yes, his too…Despite what people may think, he never believed in sleeping with anyone other than his mate"

Um, then how come he knows how to pleasure a woman if he is a virging? I think its just the way lemon fics are but virgins are horrid bed partners and instructing them in the proper methods and techniques takes most of the fun out of sex, unless one delights in instruction. So if they both are virgins, this whole scene would have played quite differently. Maybe you could write more realistic sex scenes in the future? I guess thats what most readers are expecting but when it comes to writing, sex doesnt always have to be perfect.

Another thing I would like to point out is that I know that the plot requires it so that this story can happen, but in my humble opinion its just a little... well... uncreative and lazy when authors use a forced marriage and rape scene to get two characters to hook up. And when writers use this trope, its always guaranteed that our main characters will ALWAYS enjoy rape and ALWAYS fall in love and decide to stay together at the end of the story no matter how much they hated each other in the beginning. So basically we already know everything characters are going to experience before it even happens (they hate each other, interaction, confusion, feelings, misunderstandings, "does she/he really love me or is she/he just acting?", confession and happy ending. The end.)

Your writing style is ok, but I think your story is relying too much on this 'forced marriage and rape' trope. JMO

I remember this being one of the first inukag fanfics I read. I still love it but it also makes me sad because you didn't continue it. Still hoping for an update though.

Hope everything is well for you! This is such a great story! I know its been years since you lasted updated it but it would be wonderful if you continued! I'm dying to know what happens!

Oh my goodness! This is interesting...Update soon please, Thanks! :)

Could you please update this story? I love it so much

This is such an amazing story. I love it, I really love the concept and how I can feel what they're feeling. I feel sorry for inuyasha but I'm also really frustrated at him. Why doesn't he keep trying to explain to Kagome what happened between him and Kikyo. Eventually Kagome would listen. And inuyasha doesn't really act like he really loves her either. It's such a touching story. I really hope you will finish it someday. I love how original it is and really can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update! one of the few stories that actually interest me!

Please...please...please... Continue this!... :'(:'(:'(:'(
It's a nice story... I really want to know what's going to happen now!... Please... Update this...asap... :-(

I wish that you had finished this story it was really good!
M

Wow ! This fiction is so cool! Pls continue!

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY

please update

Update soon it's great so far!

Rereading this story again and just wanted to know if you are ever going to finish, It's one of the best I've ever read and i hope you do finish.