No I want Sita dead I cried for Krishna that bitch doesn't deserve to live Elisa needs to go back and kill her

I'm with Elisa I feel sad for Krishna and I'm not gonna lie I was kinda rooting for him even tho I knew he wasn't gonna win

Loved both of your stories I couldn't stop reading them!

Loved your story!

that was a good story. but you should cut into more pages

Holy flamin sugar cubes! D8) 1322 north fourth ave. was my old address! ... you scare me with your address picking...

I love it!

Thank you for taking your time, in writing this very very long original story, it was awsome, you for sure have a future as a writer, but one thing i will liked to be here is some minor sexy scene between goliath and elisa at the end, or maybe some kissing at least?

congratulations, really :)

Ok I have to say Great Story! At first I was all like 'where's angela' and wondered about the timeline, but then she showed up. Where was she at the beginning of chapter one? Oh well, no matter. I read the whole thing in one sitting. I enjoy your writing style, even though a few times you're sentences are a bit redundant, and I was able to easily look past the minor inconsistencies.

Chapter two was especially gripping. I thought she was going to kill them and I found myself wondering, 'oh no! if she kills them she'll be out for good!' and then wondering if you were going to kill Elisa off instead. It would have been a tragic ending, but I like the happy ending better. Both of them. I hope you keep writing. Take care!

Interesting story. so crosses don't work on these vampires hu? that sucks. Good characterization and plot. I don't really get how there could be vampires that puck didn't know about though, you'd think they'd be more noticable as they seem rather murder happy. oh well. good first chapter.

th polt was amazing

Someone has read Christopher Pike, ne?

Good story. Timeless classic I suppose.

I LOVE this fic! I mean I LOVE IT! This is one of the best stories I've EVER read. Please write more Goliath/Elisa fics! I can hardly wait!

sounds okay but no cigar

Very good on both parts of the story. I'd give it for both parts 8.5/10. Please, write another chapter! There aren't enough Gargoyle fics out there! Writers, please write more.

Did you change the story or something? Because last time I read it, Elisa drank some guys blood and Matt was seriously beat up by Krishna. There's so much Elisa/Goliath stuff everywhere (I'm not complaining about your story) The original was better in my opinion. And does Matt always have to be a beaten up puppy? Matt's my favorite character and he's always left out of fan fics for some reason. To SUM it all up: this story is a wonderful action fic, and keep writing- I enjoy reading.