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That was a great story. I enjoyed the character of Axel. I am not much up on the Kyou Kara Maou universe yet, so I am not sure if Wolfram's father in your story is canon or not. Either way, I totally want to meet the guy. He sounds awesome. Fanfiction writers need to take lessons from you on how to create OCs that don't end up Mary or Gary, ridiculous, and one-dimensional. That takes a good imagination, plus some intelligence. I tip my proverbial hat to you!

I will admit, this story interested me since it was mainly about Wolfram. I want to read your story where he takes a vacation since I assume it's mostly about him. Eventually I'll get around to reading all of your other stories, but time really is of the essence and I should do some homework.

Thanks for the entertainment, yet again. It was well worth the procrastination.

PS:You mentioned your 'love' scene and I have to thank you for following the rules and guidelines set forth. That doesn't happen very often, sadly, on this site. But the way you have it written is so much better than any sort of porn that may pop up. This was a wonderful way of describing their first times together.

Thank you so much for posting this stories, I am in love right now with Wolfram, even though I am sad about what happened to all of his friends in the last story and that his first love died to. I am thrilled to continue reading :) 3

So...

Wolfram's love for Axel really runs deep...deeper than I presumed. I just want to make sure I get this right...when Wolfram heard that Axel died, Wolfram wanted to die as well? and When Yuuri barged into his life, Wolfram still has traces of feelings for Axel?

I really like this story. You capture that 'Dealing with past love' really well...when one loved someone...even if the relationship ender, it still feels like s/he's given one piece of his/her heart away the ex keeps (provided the relationship didn't end bitterly).

Axel's 'break up' with Wolfram...and that scene where Axel told Wolfram about Robair? That's well done, too. powerful. I nearly cried. I can feel for Axel. This is the first time I want Wolfram's relationship with an OC to work. but Yuuram has to come haha.

Well, this is more lime than lemon...but that demonstration part is hilarious. I'm becoming addicted to your writing!

Fiction? what fiction? I went cross-eyed while reading the dialogues between Wolfram and Cheri (Is it just me? Am I kinda idiotic like Yuuri or is it my age?) Then it starts making sense when I read that conversation between Axel and Wolfram at the end of the chapter. Wahh...so...wahh...I mean...how did you come up with them? and Bielenfeld! Made me think of Edinburgh. Old Edinburgh. (I've never been there...but I'm a faithful reader of Alexander McCall Smith's Isabel Dalhousie series...and I read 44 Scotland street and I got the same ambience you're trying to create, that quiet civillisation, that revered traditions) The culture of Bielenfeld feels so real. thumbs up!

*runs off to read the next chapter*

All those dialogues on politics...how do you get to know them? They sound very, very complicated...but again, adds reality to the story. KKM anime seems very unreal - what kingdom has her king running about in adventures? and this story sounds very serious in comparison but I prefer this D

I like the interaction between Wolfram and his soldiers-to-be...

*goes off to read the next chappies*

"Though Yuuri was really in no position to judge. He was head over heels in love for the first time in his life. With Wolfram back in his everyday court life, he was prone to walk into walls and trip over furniture, because he couldn’t take his eyes off his lover. At least Wolfram didn’t make fun of him for it. He just smiled."

it's lines like these that make me love your writing so. And this beats Yuuri's hot date by a mile, on sheer force of personality. Axel and co. shaped the Wolfram of your arcs, and their loss is much grieved. And it's not about wolfram being romanced, just reading about him makes me love a story _ I'm shallow that way.

i like this story. i can't wait to read the sequel.

lmao. best dinner scene ever. I love the Manfred character you created

and I always enjoy fics that go more into the characters

Greatest everest. Yes, thats me again. Same time, same place, different people around. Still cant laugh aloud. My stomach hurts. It is pity that I dont have enough time and have to sleep and eat sometimes, otherwise I would just read them all all over again.

Teeheehee

Thank you,

S. :-)

Btw, beautiful pictures on your homepage.

wow these stories are weird but good

loved your story.. poor wolfram, getting raped and all. i like the way you made it both funny ("don't screw up the teddy bear position" - loved that part) and serious and sad. i love the Wolfram you made, he's responsible and more in control that the official version of himself (the anime character) and i also love axel's personality.. i wonder if he was in love with Wolfram till the end..

anyway, this goes to my favorites! good job!

hahhaha...that was so hilarious...hahahha...

The "sweet lemon" scene was good, not to innocent not to "hard"? I liked it

it waz alright