It was a really great story...

Until you ripped my heart out of my chest and stomped it into the dust OMG why?

Ugh

I need an adult

I almost sais your story lighten the heart but no.
I like the other one better. Good try anyway. :/

Wow. That was...AWESOME!

Dun dun dun! Why'd you stop there?! Good story.

Um... Boring, stupid and needlessly cruel. They wouldn't have had to have killed cattie Brie because they could have just left her with the dwarves and held the threat of killing her over his head. That would have given him even more reason to come back to them and actually try not to die. Also that ending wasn't clever or interesting, it was just annoying.

Wow this was good! A special story that if Drizzt became weapons master. I have some Drizzt fics too, look up my name. )

I really enjoyed this whole book, it was such a nice spin to see.

Keep up the good work look forward to more

Battle Captive? I definitely didnt expect that. Lloth is sneaky there must be some ulterior motive for this pairing. I'll read on to find out.

Great chapter. I'll definitely keep reading. That little brat Vrellin, need to be taught a lesson.

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I don't even know what to say about that ending. Drizzt's feelings about the blankets and such was so sentimental, you really feel for him and his helplessness that all he can do is wait for a natural death to occur to get him out of there and back to his love.

And then this kid walks in... WOW what mixed emotions I have right now! Great story!

What the...? #*&$ #* % $&%*# !

Oh... I really liked your portrayal of Catti-brie, and Drizzt loving her so tenderly. I wasn't expecting you to kill her. Drizzt's little sister must die!

Well written, i'm enjoyin this story.

Whooho! He said it! He said 'I love you'!

Good chapter, i enjoyed the escape. I also like the way you have Drizzt evaluating Catti-brie's ability to move around the city, it lends credence to the character.

Ah, love is in the air! Along with ssinssrigg, i would say. This chapter is very interesting, to see their relationship develop. Again, Catti-brie comes across more strongly than Drizzt, but I like them both.

I like Catti's personality, but Drizzt seems a little too soft for having survived in his homeland for so long. Still, I want to see how volatile and life-changing this encounter between the two will be. What a wonderful idea, to show them meeting if Drizzt had stayed with his family!

How very sad to see my hero as he would have been if he hadn't run away from home. In one of many alternate realities, Drizzt stayed, and his life is so totally depressing. Well written, and I want to know more!