Really. You threw in a princess bride quote. I love it thank you

...well.
...well.
I HATE YOU!
...
Now that my rage is spent, I'm off to go sob my heart out...
...oh and, you're really an exceptional writer, you know that?

The duels were better than the ones in either the Originals or the prequels, the carbonite freezing scene was *twice* as heartbreaking as in the movie (and I cried twice as much, too, thank you for that,) and the storyline itself was quite plausible. And sad. But with a note of light in it too.
And yes, you stole from Matt Stover, but I'm not gonna be the one to condemn you. xD (I've been known to do so myself, at times.) Have you ever read his book Luke Skywalker and the Shadows of Mindor?

Princess Bride was never my favorite movie, but that is one of my favorite quotes, (the other ones pertaining to being *mostly* dead.) And I love all the verbal artwork by Matthew Stover woven in.

I rather love this possibility. What happened to Rex, though?

Vaapad. Strength through controlling the Dark, without it controlling you.
And you must admit, JarJar improved in the CW series.

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Very cool, I liked it.

Though I fear the amount of angst it would contain, this chapter alone deserves a sequel.

"If Anakin were to save his mother?"

Are you kidding me? That would have enormous repercussions. For one thing, he would temporarily stave off the fall to the Dark Side. He could probably then take her to Coruscant to live under the protection of the Jedi Order. She would be able to help him with his doubts and fears. Palpatine would have to kill both her and Padme, and when Anakin loses both of them at once, he would be become even more anguished and fall harder into the Dark Side.

Your story is amazingly good, it explores all those what ifs that those who emerge in the GFFA world come across. There is only one path but there are so many possibilities, this is what fanfiction is really about.

Well, this was probably the most poorly written thing I've seen in months. With entire passages totally stolen from Matthew Stover, a complete lack of originality, total disregard for grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraph rules, you've really made something horrible out of this. God knows that in no way is this good, and in no way does it follow any logic, either common sense-wise or Star Wars-wise. Quick question: How does Palpatine make an army of clone Sith including Vader when Vader NEVER existed? Truly, it's terrible.

KICK ASS!

This is great, every part of it. You're one of the best at writing Force duels, and all your what-if ideas are plausible and fairly believable. And I love your writing style.

This was a GREAT chapter. Very intense lightsaber duels. I loved it. Do you think you could R&R my fic? It's called Yoda: Dark Lord of the Sith. I'd like your opinion on it. Update soon.