I like the theme, it's very interesting. However, I don't really like the way it was written. For one, you just present the info at once. You've got to let the reader slowly get the info. Another thing is that the characters were a bit too Mary sue. The interactions were a bit...I dunno how to put it, they lacked depth. Like they were making small talk with a stranger. And the clothing, I don't know about other schools, but I'm pretty sure I would get dress coded if I wore a shirt like that. It's just really provocative. Other than that, I enjoyed the chapter.

Why would you end it like that it was so sad.I love it but please make a second !

Hey! I really love your plot idea with the paranormal twist thrown in. Do you mind if I use your idea? Of course it won't be the same but I'd like to use the idea of the abilities and Naruto and Haku being brothers. Do you mind?

Nice...Love your descriptiveness! I love the plot!

I really loved your story it was so romantic, funny, and full of action, well to me. I really loved the way you put your story together with magic and everything it was so col XD! and you should totally make a sequel thats if you feel like if you do please make it. Oh yeah and thank you so much for writing this story it was awsome and fun to read THANK YOU SO MUCH XD!

i wanna see (3) and (4)in the email is on my send me the link. thx _.

so far i like this story but i really hope that narutos vision dosent come to would be sad.

so far this is a very original fic...i like it. i think its cool that hakus narutos bro and that they have idea. oh and i loved their shirts _.

OMG! I hope that U write a sequel!

I love the story!

Yay for sasu/naru & Ita/Haku!

i wanna see the vids for both moves my e-mail is

I'm defenetly going to continue this...:P

O.M.G.

look i know thi sounds kinda stupid fron an unknown reviewer but, HEY, i've got a profile here so i guess that makes me somewhat less unknown, ne?

anw i just wanted to let you know that this story was great and a sequal is most defenetly needed...that's all.

Please take my request seriously, i'm sure others like me and your cousin would LOVE to have a sequal for this story...:]

That chapter covered all the loose ends. It was good.

do u live in FL. at my old school in FL they have a ROTC's class. do u have to dress up sometime. and what is it?

DUDE! I just read it from start to finish. THIS STORY IS AWESOME! Please write a sequal.