Wow, I thought the Monique x Junior ship in the first ES was out there, but you really went hog wild in this one, didn’t you?
I was actually surprised to find some minor spelling errors and missing words in this one - I guess no one’s perfect after all. :-(
Still, another fine effort from MrDrP!
Now, I just need to get my hands on the PDVI, because I sm sure you wrote/completed Epic Sitch Eye Eye in another dimension/universe ...

“Coming soon: Commencement – An all-new series featuring Kim, Ron, and the gang, taking off where Graduation ended.“ Alas, not meant to be, huh?

Oh well, I’m enjoying the heck out of this one again.

I'm a little confused on your decision to include Kin's proposal to Ron as an epilogue to the previous story (Book 3 in the epic stitch saga). what happened to the remaining members of the cantankerous team inpossible after they were released by the French police?

Good and intresting story so far

it was a very engaging read. I look forward to seeing new stories from you posted on the site hehe

Nice warp up with bow and everything.

So, does this mean it's the end of the series?

I know you personal life has gotten busier, but hey a little stop by with a nice tale to tell amongst friends? Who can turn that done.

I hope to have more stories down the road, and maybe even you have a chance to check mine too.

Thanks for all that you've done here and what you will do in the future.

Great story had me a little tweaked when in the begging thinking Kim was going to dump Ron for some other guy lol. but it was a nice way to draw me in at the begging instead of having them all be lovey.

damn i would have liked to give a review for every single chapter but i would only have said awesome 13 times i've read like 8 stories from you one after one and i never get bore because sometime with the same author things start just to get repetitive but i find every story the plot, the sitch, the jokes ) ! orignal and fresh

Very sad about wade, kim and ron take it pretty good thou. Glad for yori. Funny thing with bonie and wally especially the last part very funny ). Also i find senseis situation strange i mean i realy enjoy the idea but i think it doesnt fit senseis character he is supose to be a wise man who do things for good but the way he end bout stealing, disaproving ron and insulting kim at the very end without correct himself or his sickness is suppose to escuse him for what he did

hope i didnt say to much at the end for those who havent read im just curious

I just got into KP fanfic and your compositions are my first and I have to say I love it! Though I have to ask the relevance of the very first scene where Kim says she hasn't been looking for a new relationship but met someone from Foody Faire she fell in love with and had to tell Ron. I will be reading more of your stories and would no doubt be reviewing them along the way. Thanks!

Well, to start with I wanted to say that this is the first KP story that I have the chance to review as I have spent most of my time reading and writing in the Avatar: the Last Airbender fandom, and to be perfectly honest, I was very impressed.

I hadn't watched this show in a while so it took me a couple chapters to remember everything (the phrases, some of the small details of the character's personalities), but as I read on over the past few days, it all more or less came back.

Your story captured the characters very well and I enjoyed reading about their adventures (or misadventures) and loved how you tied in characters such as Mr. Barkin, Sensei, and Phin even when they usually didn't play a prominant role in Kim's missions.

The twists and turns of the plot were great and while Sensei's actions confused me for a while, I understood in the end. You have a great way of explaining things, especially Kim and Ron's relationship and their specific thoughts/way of thinking.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story and am probably going to continue on read more of what you got. )

I liked a lot about this story. Ron and Kim learn that it takes a lot to maintain their relationship and it is the stronger for it! I also like the other relationships that you presented. Let start with Phin and Shego. Shego is my favorite villain of the series and I love to see when something good happens to her. They seems to be so well matched and have a lot of things in common, Plus, they are so cute together! Now on to Will and Yori. I was happy to see that Yori found someone that is better suited for her than Hirotaka. He was too much of a player and Will seems to be a more a one woman kind of man. Ok, now on to Mrs. S and Mr. B. I found it hilarious that Mr. Barkin could end up being Ron’s step dad and Kim's future Father-in-Law! Too funny!

I also want to touch on Drakken and Shego. Shego is not as heartless as some make her out to be and I liked that you showed that she still cares for her friend even if he is crazy and committed. That scene where she visited him was very touching!

I have to say that the saddest part about the whole story was Sensei. I know that he wasn’t him self at the end because of his condition, but I think that you put a positive spin on his situation because so many good things came of it. It was bittersweet.

For the last bit, I wanted to comment on the Bonnie and Wally story line. I can see those two together because they are so much alike in the opinion that they have of themselves and the world. If I had one thing to say about the story that could be criticism (hopefully you see it as constructive and not negative), it would be their place in this story, the plot seemed incomplete, last we saw they were making plans with the guards to retake the country and that was it, we never found out the result. I’m assuming that you will continue in it in your next story of this series, but I was still wondering at the end of this story what was going on with Bonnie and Wally. I don’t know maybe if there was a little something at the end that indicated what happened or a blurb that stated it will be continued in a later story would help the reader and they wouldn’t be left wondering ‘what happened’.

Anyway, enough from me, I loved this story and really I found it very entertaining! Thanks so much!

The Ninja Lunch Lady and (wow!) What was I saying before about putting the domino pieces in unexpected, and yet completely logical, combinations?

That sense of playful surprise is a hallmark of your work, and one of the many reasons that your stories always satify the reader.

Kudos!

Okay, first off, KP so does not (spoiler alert), except, you know, when she's really, really tired. Both scenes of longstanding partnerships breaking up were handled were quite effectively, and then at the end, a very intriguing potential pairing. You are like a domnino master, with a finite collection of pieces to play with - and an infinite imagination for combining said pieces in the most thought provoking combinations.

No action, muted humor, and wonderfully depicted sentiment. Excellent job with this one.

Another excellent installment here, with the description of the Supreme Monkey Master power assumption being particularly well done.

But I'm confused. I believe I understood the Hikaru reference in Chapter Eight (being a huge Space Passage fan and all). However in this chapter Sensei is called Hideki-sama. What am I missing here?