Reviews for A Year With the Marauders |
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![]() ![]() Soooooooo good pls continue (i know u Write it ages ago but...) |
![]() ![]() Amazing ️ |
![]() ![]() hmmm why do those names remind me of the first names of a series of movies I'm reading the fanfic of? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please this is great please please continue soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg please update I Love this story 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! This is soo interesting! |
![]() ![]() brilliant story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really really hope it was continued you know.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where is Quidditch?! |
![]() ![]() Two errors. "I'm sure you won't, Daniel," Remus said, grinning at the two. He was glad to see mother and son getting along. "Nothing could bring Lily down." How did Remus know? Need to keep it in the POV. Another, Harry has used unforgivables to fight voldemort. Isn't he sort of hypocritical if he condems those who use them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great! I love the way you turned it into the past and have Hermione (Emma) go on one of her rants about house-elves. THere are a few grammar erorrs but I can wave that off. All in all it's a good story so far. Just please update soon and finish this story, don't abandon this it! It's just getting underway! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story so far! cant wait to see how the rest turns out! pleease update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() dorm mates, not doormats, lol. |