lol nice, very cute

AHH I loved this scene because it was one of the few scenes that really showed the relationship between rose and the doctor. i love the way you wrote this !

After reading this I miss Nine! This episode was so amazing in so many ways and I loved reliving it especially with this alternative ending, wish it had gone that way!

I am indescribably happy right now. So perfect. That kiss was so tender I think I melted. Definite favorite!

So so so well done. Loved it

Oh, yes, I would have loved to see the scene done your way. Very nice. I think you managed to capture the thoughts of the characters and actually have those thoughts work for the situation. Good job!

I really wouldn't have minded if the show had gone this way ;)

OMG the story was so sweet :) and the last line was so right :)

If only, if only...

Lovely story. You could feel the UST there. Nicely written :)

Tonight I stumbled over your livejournal and read your story

" Welcome to your life " and it was truly beautiful.

I wrote you a message in your journal and checked my second home ( ffnet :D ) for your stories.

" The Doctor Dances " caught my eyes, because this is still a very special series for me. I love their chemistry and I really adore the way the doctor speaks *sigh*

Your story is so intense that it made me shiver at some points. You've done a hell of a job. Love it !

Awesome! I love it!

Hehe yes this is definitely how the scene should have gone... I can't believe we didn't get ONE proper kiss with the Doc/Rose in however many episodes!

now that was cute.

Totally, 100% agreed. This is how it should have happened.