Reviews for Trust Flies On Fragile Wings |
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vintage chapter 6 . 11/18/2006 after 81 reviews, i can't believe you discontinued this fic. was i too harsh on my last review! i'm sorry! i really wanted to see more...ah its too bad. but i guess i can't blame you, i NEVER finish my stories, lol. |
theywouldntletmedeletethis chapter 6 . 10/18/2006 Interesting. :) I like it so far. The tensions are realistic. Makes it easier to connect with - very cool. Waiting for an update. :) L |
phoenixphantasy chapter 1 . 8/8/2006 are you ever gonna update? i've waited 2 months and nada...please write the next chapter soon! i'm running out of things to read! |
marinawings chapter 6 . 7/3/2006 another good chapter! yay! i think you are doing an excellent job with the characters. they are very believable. the different relationships and reactions between them are so realistic, so true to the characters. good work with that. i can't wait to read more! update soon! marinawings ps i'm glad you like my reviews! i like your story! |
Faile Aybara chapter 6 . 7/2/2006 Loved the chapter! Update SOON! |
vintage chapter 6 . 7/2/2006 hey, i have been following your story for awhile and i have been really enjoying it. i like the pace, and how you stay true to the characters personalities. its refreshing to see that you give consideration and close attention to each character, instead of stereotyping them like i have seen in a lot of other fanfics. Rika, also, has a strong and unique personality, she seems considerate yet tough; i like that about her and i am excited to see how far her powers will develop. The story moves well but i am eager for some action! which leads to my only problem, the admittance of John into the academy. i understand why you want to add pyro into the scene, it provides for drama and added pairings; however, john was a criminal who intentionally and knowingly endangered and probably killed many innocent people (including bobby, the horror! well not killed but you know what i mean). he understood what he was doing, and i don't think it is fair for him to just come back to the school without any sort of punishment at all. Furthermore, although we did see some tension, i can't see many of the students being very acceptant of john. i mean come on there has got to be a fight! uhemm, well besides that, I have been enjoying your story and i eagerly wait for the next update (with action...?). |
andie sky chapter 6 . 7/2/2006 im so confused. how come johns so pissed just because rika said they should have an ice-cream eating contest? call me stupid...but i dont get it. |
BreezenBy chapter 6 . 6/30/2006 Oh Yay! I was waiting for the newest installment, and I enjoyed very much. But I must agree with you, I liked chapter five. I felt she and Angel were connecting. But continue up the good work, I'm sure I will like it! |
sharkies chapter 6 . 6/30/2006 poor john... interesting chapter. Keep up the good work |
Ghostwriter626 chapter 6 . 6/30/2006 so much drama |
mysterious-muse chapter 6 . 6/30/2006 I really emjoyed this chapter. I like the personality you're giving every character. You're doing a great job so far. I can't wait to read more! |
Ebbagull chapter 5 . 6/24/2006 oh, great fic! interessting couples.. (not in a bad way)i love it so far, update soon! :D |
Pernese Empress chapter 5 . 6/23/2006 Great story so far. Angel and Rika look good together. Update soon. See,ya later! |
phoenixphantasy chapter 5 . 6/20/2006 how sweet! write another chapter soon! |
touchnotthecat chapter 5 . 6/17/2006 good, i am starting to get used to the hole angelxrika thing a bit as they are together more. oh and sorry it took so long to review been busy! Good work and i hope you update soon! |