Reviews for Chromaticity
O2Shea chapter 17 . 6/25/2013
We just finished reading your story & LOVED it! Even the end was so much more positive than anything we have ever seen written for Peter. You actually gave him redemption. Bravo!

All of your colors were spot on.

:) Patricia & Shannon
katyaelizabeth chapter 17 . 6/16/2013
Beautiful, not a single character/colour disagreement. Luna, Fleur, and Snape were my favourites.
Enna Moon chapter 17 . 6/6/2011
LSKJFL;AKJF;LJIAO;RFIJJASGSOTJGTE.

That's what happens when something's too amazing for words. Sorry if that scared you. Anyhow, this is perfectly amazingly ridiculoulsy beautiful. This entire story is wicked in character...I don't even know what to say.
Enna Moon chapter 16 . 6/6/2011
This is amazing, and perfect, and awesome, and...I'm going to stop now.
Enna Moon chapter 15 . 6/6/2011
I LOVE this. I love Mrs. Weasely. So very, very much. I love that she was the one to take down Bella. And I love the way you portray her here.
Enna Moon chapter 12 . 6/6/2011
I also felt the need to let you know I really like this one.
Enna Moon chapter 11 . 6/6/2011
I absolutely adore this, and it makes me almost like Fleur. :)
Enna Moon chapter 5 . 6/6/2011
This is gorgeous. :)
Enna Moon chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I like this so far, quite a bit. One little piece of concrit:

"Silver like moonlight, like her wing—but she doesn't have wing, though she could"-should be "a wing".

Also, I feel stupid saying this, but I have absolutely no idea who the "he" is...
Perpetually High chapter 17 . 5/24/2011
This was done beautifully.

I love the quietness with which you handled the characters and your theme.

This is intelligent writing.

Cheers!
The Purple Eyed Fox chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
When are you going to update? Honestly? There are people waiting, you know. It's been ages too. So...why not update?
Shubhs chapter 17 . 10/21/2010
They all were beautiful.
ark the wanderer chapter 17 . 11/26/2009
Hey.. this was really good. A very unique way of looking at the characters we love (and hate). I just have one comment though. In the "Pink" chapter (that was Tonks wasn't it?), you said that the Holyhead Harpies wear pink. They don't. They wear dark green and gold... Right I just want to point that out('cause I'm obssessed with Quidditch and I hate it when people get something about it wrong). I know, you probably don't care...
Katamabob chapter 17 . 11/22/2009
This is an amazing story/collection! Really well written and original. I loved the different takes on aspects of character running with the theme. The last chapter's subject surprised me, but I was really impressed by the ending of it.
seven days later chapter 17 . 8/17/2009
my god that was one of the most touching fanfictions that i have ever read. you've characterised them wonderfully, and i think that it's great how you kept the names out of most of them. keep them guessing, that's what i say! write more!
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