I loved what you done. I was also disappointed they did not explain it well. Brava

This story is old (and so is this fandom) but I wanted to take a trip down memory lane. Anyway, I really liked the prologue, although the dream scene was cliche. Still hot, though. I'm looking forward to carving out some time to read the rest. Also looking forward to more scenes with these two.

takayaxnaoe is one of the most tragic pair..love them to bits..

Aaawww, that was awesome! Well written with some brilliant fun bits. ;P

This was the most in character, epic, fantastic, fic I have ever read!

Gyaaaaa! Kyaaaaa! Hyaaaaa!

This is The BEST! ONE OF THE BESTEST! AWESOME! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

KYAAAAA! LOVE IT!

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How they began so intimate to each other felt so real! I'm glad they accept each other so well!

And how the friendship between Chiaki and Takaya more showed and clear, was the best!
And how Yuzuru didnt angry at Takaya was so real!

:'D i'm glad...! #sobbed

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And these hot sex scene was great! ;)

This is beautiful.
Some things I caught over and over again, though, was awkward phrasing.
Thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed it.

I love how you included action in this story. It's so hard to find fics that focus on the emotional development & that also have fights. Lol, the relationship between Naoe & Takaya is adorable. Such a good story.

It really was amazing-the emotion of it-you could really relate to the characters. Not that we readers have ever been in such a dramatic situation. Still though, it was psychologically well done & it appeals to the inner fangirl. I just loved everything about it. Thank you so much for writing it & sharing it with us. PLEASE WRITE MORE

Ah just finished it great story love how Naoe defended Takaya and how their enemy was defeated. I do wonder how Naoe managed to make it out alive and suprise his love like that. Ha ha it is obvious that Naoe could straighten the tie with no problems, so cute. Good story I liked it very much.

Poor Naoe and Takaya being used against each other for information like that. At least Takaya accepted his feelings regardless of their relationship problems. Hope the gang can escape soon.

Ha ha ha those two fighting is so funny drag queen and pms were the funniest. The rock star angle was pretty cool as well. Poor Irobe though and the parents.

The gang finds out where they need to go and Takaya finds out more about his past with Naoe. Naoe really needs some therapy about his obession with Takaya.

Ah they finally meet up with the creatures, at least Takaya got one of those things. How is Naoe doing though is a good question.

Ah the mystery deepens, poor Naoe he got messed with badly didn't he. Takaya is taking charge isn't he. Hope that they find Irobe soon.

Good chapter love how Takaya goes nuts over the taunting and how Naoe takes measures to control him. Sweet chapter I liked it good job.