Yola is kawaii!

Wow the Nibi just ruined her life. Her backstory might be worse than naruto’s. Not Gaara’s bc her family didn’t try to kill her like Gaara’s did.

yo I noticed a little mistake of the word earnt is it meant to be earned?

I can't get over how stupid your Naruto is. Even cannon Naruto could keep a promise. Not to mention that you're hiraishin is crazy. Not a bad story, just some really bad elements.

so right. I've been looking for Naruto/Oc stories forever

i vote

i do not know if hidden nin are real in canon, but is it not strange that some says they are hidden nin and then they believe it so easily. also the 3rd mizukage was already dead a while, and it was the 4th or 5th mizukage that was the kage of that time.

you don't want Naruto to be overpowered with a bloodline but it's okay for him to learn the hiraishin in just over an hour...WTF?

Yes dude. You're awesome and Fuck that NaruHina bullshit.

I'm sick with all the NaruSaku Or NaruHina I just want a decent NaruOc

The Naruto shows uses Shichi? I don't remember them using that... if I'm not mistaken they used Nanabi.

Wait... so Mei haven't won the war yet? Or is this another twist of yours? (No offense intended)

I really don't get why are there people who flame this fic...

Hmm so far it's nice... i still don't get why are there so many people hatin on this fic. Oh well, haters are gonna hate...

Yukushi Yukiko? Yakushi so Kabuto's sister? Or relative? Meh~ maybe i'll get the answer later on in the book.