please update asap

thanks

I like the Willow and Dean scene after he woke up. That seems about the way Dean would play it. You wake up in a strange place with strange people your going to be a little on the offensive side.

I really can't wait to read what you have planned as to a reason as to why Dean needs to be considered dead in order to complete the hunt.

What I'm getting from the timeline is that you started from the end of the Devil's Trap and pickup from some time after the car crash. When Sam and John woke up after the crash Dean was gone and assumed dead.

I like the concept you are developing here. I can't wait to find out why this is all happening. It should be an interesting journey.

The funeral was a little rough. I have never heard the term knock up at a funeral in my life. I think it was a little inappropriate. There are better way to say that he hoped that Dean would of had a family and kids by now. Then again if Dean was saying it on a normal basis he probably would use those terms. So it really depends on what you were going for.

Interesting.

Can't wait to see where this is headed.

i hope you don't wait so long to update it again! its really good this far

You are evil. I can't wait till Tuesday for more. I feel so bad for Sam. Don't drag this story on. Dean has to come back VERY SOON. Well it'll be a good day because another chapter and the last day of school. So hurry and make Tuesday come.