I really like it,
It so funny, especially Edmund's reaction when Peter ask Edmund to dance with him,
Please make more,

Ha ha ha ha! Good work on the bratty brothers break up the romance.

BAHAHAHAHAHA! That was funny! Amazing! XD

Great story, but I'm pretty sure that a) homosexuality was illegal, and I'm talking prison or death sentence illegal here, in England at that time, and b) "gay" wasn't a term for it.

Holy cow! That was absolutely hysterical! I loved it, and the slashy humor came off beautifully (even though I don't usually care for it) and I was sitting and trying not to laugh too loud. Oh, and the grapes were an ingenious addition.

ROTFLMAO

There are not enough stories about the Pevensies after they get back to England. This is *awesome.*

This story was, by far, one of the most amusing ones that I've read. It had me laughing out loud as I got to the part about dancing. Great job!

that was hilarious! i had my doubts at first but you pulled it off, brilliantly! i could see James freaking out over something as small as that. and to think that Edmund was freaking out about it as well. WONDERFUL work!

Ahahaha, what anothe cute story! Such perfection and planning! I wouldn't think Peter would do such a thing!

Excellent! xD I loved this so much! I was laughing and biting my hand to not squeal the whole way! Loved the almost-slashy undertones! :D good job on James-just the kinda guy susan needs to dump, and the brothers get to excercise their imaginations. :D

I absolutely adored and I mean adored this two-shot. I love the bond between Edmund and Peter. This fanfiction just got me hooked into the whole lovely brotherly relationship between Peter and Edmund. I was laughing throughout the whole story. You've done a wonderful job writing a humorous situation. Thank you for writing this two-shot, and thank you for putting a smile on my face. This is one my favorite fanfictions ever.

Hahaha! It was hysterical! Absolutely bloody brilliant :D Omg I died when they started dancing, and then the kiss! Haha that just sealled it! lol Awesome story!

nice i love it

I know this is not a slash story,since you've mentioned it a few times.I got curious that's why I started reading it. Chapter 2 is very funny..I don't think dancing and holding hands between siblings are considered slash.I think it's cute..especially for brothers..and if the brothers are Peter and Edmund.

Loved your on writing!

Really, really funny. To think that I like the character of Peter better than the rest. Goodness. He's amusing. Edmund is cool. Typical younger brother.