Reviews for Fragility |
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Brynn Reaper chapter 6 . 8/9/2018 Whew, she made it! Thank goodness for that, you had me worried for a bit there! :D |
EJect chapter 6 . 6/26/2016 Nice setting up the beginning of this chapter to convince us all Shandra had already died |
creativesm75 chapter 6 . 2/21/2015 nice story |
Hailey-Stone chapter 6 . 9/3/2013 Can I hug this story? I really just wanna hug this story. Everything about it is so freaking perfect, I can't even. Allow me to shower you with flowers representing my love for you and this story. .:Hailey-Stone, yo:. |
Book girl fan chapter 5 . 8/28/2013 Shandra is really sweet, and has the funniest perception of things. I particularly like the Mr Spock hands. When I read that her older brother had his appendix out, and got to play video games while their grandfather read to him, I thought of Princess Bride. |
TNM-Writer chapter 6 . 8/16/2013 So cute. Made me wanna cry, too. |
Carly Carnations chapter 6 . 5/30/2013 Awww, so cute. I think I have a little tear in the corner of my eye :) |
One-Phantom-Star-Hero chapter 6 . 7/23/2012 Love this story! |
Deliciously Delirious chapter 6 . 4/30/2012 The way things were in Shandra's perspective just broke my heart. She's so innocent and trying to make sense of so many frightening and painful things...I love it all. 10/10, my friend! |
odo chapter 6 . 11/9/2011 Well done, what a nice story ! You got the POV of the five year old budding mutant just right, as well as the characters of the other Xmen: Logan's reluctant caring and bravery, Ororo's worries and Kurt's comforting her and his trust. Write another one, or no, better five more! |
Topazione chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 normally i read the whole thing before i review (i can't stand reading incomplete stories, it annoys me not being able to finish them)but that chapter was amazing. well done. |
The Mutant Jinx chapter 6 . 4/19/2011 I loved this. Everything was perfect. Thank you for sharing! |
The Mutant Jinx chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 This is already sad to read in places. I like Shandra - she's adorable. :) |
Lady Shagging Godiva chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Oh God, you made me cry and it's the first chapter. You've really captured the mind of a five year old too. It's just...amazing. |
TillyMe chapter 6 . 8/15/2010 That is too cute to ignore. Wicked:) |