I wish tony had gone to visit kevin after all he helped tony too

fabulous story

Awesome story!

Your story pulled me in and kept me reading until the end. Well written also. Thank you and best wishes from the USA!

Awww amazing story! :D

Poor Tony volunteer to do something like that

Glad it turned out ok for him

and it didnt do any damage or give him nightmares

I enjoyed your story. Tony had a really hard mission to survive. I am glad he could give a little peace to the father of the dead girl. Very well written und great Tony-Whump.

Great story.

Very interesting and loved the surprises and twists. :)

Congrats! Lots of stars!

whew i was so worried that tony was going to die! haha but i love how mcgee and abby were playing cards on tony's bed :) great story!

thank you very much for the fiction and let me just say that I really loved the style of your writing... I enjoyed reading this fiction and it is surly going on my favorites... thank you again :D

Lol LOVE the stargate quote... if thats where you got it from! XD

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Aww such a beautiful story, in that demented, half crazed, i love reading torture fic stories kinda way, i loved the ending

Garce, Rache

wonderful story:) Sequel? What happened with that phone call...hm

Well done; very well done. I absolutely LOVED this story.

I would like to note that there was one typo that I found, in the dialogue, "“You gave us quiet a scare, DiNozzo.”" "quiet" should be "quite" you just switched the t and the e. I sometimes make the same error; it's an easy one to make.

Other than that, well done.

Again, spoilt isn't a word. Spoiled. Fix the typos and errors in grammar.