Oh my goodness, there are tears cascading down my face and it's getting kind of hard to breathe. This was incredibly beautiful and fantastic. I truly, truly loved this and will treasure it. It makes me wish that I had someone to love so unconditionally. This was outstanding. Thank you for writing it.

I don't know if you're still reading your reviews, but here goes nothing.

It's a good story. Or perhaps even a beautiful one. You might laugh and think that it was all just written on a whim, but really, it's the little things like messages in bottles that make all the difference, isn't it?

Call me a sentimental fool, but I see a story that speaks of faith, friendship, and memory when I read this oneshot. Faith in the passage of the bottles between worlds, and friendship that literally went beyond words and worlds. Memory was for the stories which grew to be forgotten over time, like so many other good things in this world.

The lack of sequence breakers made it a little confusing initially, but a second reading made it all clear. At that point, the lack of breakers didn't detract from the story's quality so much as it made the story suit its flavor.

Very well-done indeed.

Oh goodness, that is such a tearjerker... It takes a while, but one it sinks in, I feel really dang sad...

Cheers

Fraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh. Sora Jr.? Bloody hell, what happened to Sora Sr.? BLOOdy hell, this story...

Okay, I have to admit that it confused me at first, but it it ends up making too much sense and really really is a tearjerker. Wonderful work.

That was beautiful, but also kind of confusing. I think that that was part of the beauty of it, though.

I love this so damn much. Had to read it twice over to really understand it, and once I did it was just...beautiful. Just so gorgeous.

Love it.

So sad and tragic yet so beautiful.

HeLLo.!

First,i'LL give you my deepest praise for writing this fic.!This is certainly one of the decent kh fics out there,(which is hard to find nowadays,seeing from the huge amount of archieves here..), it is bittersweet and short but somehow it teLLs so much, i think he was sora,but turned out he wasnt, lol,

i read at your profile page that you quit posting here,and i think it is such a waste,you see,cuz in my personal opinion you have a pretty good ability in writing so..ahem,i cant ask you to post again here cuz you perhaps have your own reasons not to,i figured out that much, but it'LL really be nice to see your other works :)

have a good day.!

I read this story twice in a daze, the third time around it made me cry. I'm fairly certain the same would happen the fourth time. All I have to say is that it's become one of my favorite kh fics and will continue to be for a long while.

lolol You know I was wondering why Kairi was old and Sora wasn't. -bangs head- Very nice ending. Bittersweet goodness.

That was just plain out great. Yes, I know words cannot describe the true nature of you're writing, but I will try to. The time thing was strangely understandable. I kind of had to read some things over again to get it, but you know, in good writing that's what you have to do. You have to read the story so many times that you finally get what's in between the lines. I really loved the fact that Riku's gift of time was passed down to Sora and Kairi's grand kid. (At least that's what I think happened) I get the drift that little Sora put that bottle in the ocean because that was what he had to do to keep time flowing the way it was supposed to. Either that or he had to put it in the ocean to FIX time, and make it flow the way it was supposed to. Whichever one is right, this was a beautifully written story. I really enjoy your writing. You're head to head with Ginger Ninja as one of the best writers on You're great!~

Oh. My. God.

Oh, my. Oh, this is gorgeous. This one almost made me cry. I... well, my training tells me that I should be scolding you for intentionally misleading the reader as to who your main character is for half the story. But I can't bring myself to say anything bad about this story. Obviously, it worked. Training be damned. It's an odd, twisty way to characterize, but it's strong and subtle and clear.

There's incredible power of language in this story. "Time for luck, or a miracle." "They will go together." "Because he can bend time now."

The next time I consider giving up on fanfiction, I'll remember your stories.

Beautiful. It's amazing. I absolutely love this story. It's so sad and nostalgic but still sweet. I was a little confused at the beginning, but it made sense at the end. I like the idea of the bottles going to the right person, place, time, etc. It's just.. well, one of my favorite stories now. Very, very good.

I cried after reading that. Oh, my god. That was... well, since I cried I think you know what I'm going to say. But, it was so moving and sad... and angsty. And just so... well, I'm going to go cry more now.