excellent story. Poor Lucy. my first time seeing the play I thought the crazy beggar was there to point out things that the audience already suspects. I thought she was just more observant. As it turned out, she did know more than any one person in the play and it seemed to have driven her over the edge. You portrayed this really well. ;D

Wow.

That was some nice work there.

The shifting points of view got a bit confusing- perhaps if you could separate it with lines or some other divider, it would be a bit clearer.

But I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Terribly, terribly sad, but also very very good. Congrats on turning out a well done, believable and interesting piece. _~

The last line chilled and shocked me just as much as the ending of the actula play. Such an abrubt and tragic end...

Wonderful, just wonderful.